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No one confused him for a graduate of yale 
No stuffy air was visible
He was charming and quite the intellectual 
And the ladies flocked to be amazed
Words dripped from his lips like honey butter
His keyboard was aged and produced the sweetest wines
Everyone agreed it was fine with notes of chocolate, 
so decadent much admired
So she took a sip convinced just to quench her thirst
but he offered her gold and everything that glittered
She accepted all 
and drank even more from the cup
Before you knew it she was drunk
He stole her soul when she was wasted
But she was strong so she fought and won
Celebrating her victory by declaring him a thief and CROWNING him king of liars

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  1. Date: 4/28/2013 9:43:00 PM
    Very nice. I like the shift at "His keyboard was aged..." Jack

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 6:06:00 AM
    This was delightful my dear Abigale! Love the way you weaved this tale and the very fitting ending! Love ya! Big hugs, Jack xoxox

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 10:10:00 PM
    Wow Abigale, a very powerful poem indeed. I always enjoy reading your verses as well. Thank you for your visit I haven't been getting as many as I should like. I hope my poems aren't too offensive.I do like to speak my mind.

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 6:27:00 PM
    Whoa!!! Now this is a serious write my friend. Lessons surrounds us. That's all I can say on that one. I'm glad that the female here was able to fight back and realize who she was at war with. I thank God that I'm not like that guy..Smh...excellent write maam!!!

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 6:20:00 PM
    Thanks for the comment, and nice poem.