Creation

C old and dark, naught fills the waste when, r are, a blast cracks through the void. E arth forms near the bright sun a s rocks hit the moon. T he world is born i n life's dawn, o ld yet n ew. 10/07/15

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Skat A

Date: 10/19/2015 11:25:00 PM

James, Congrats on your win. --SKAT :)

James Inman
Date: 10/20/2015 7:59:00 AM

Thank you SKAT.

Balveen Cheema

Date: 10/17/2015 7:11:00 AM

Congrats James!

James Inman
Date: 10/20/2015 7:58:00 AM

Thank you Balveen.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/17/2015 1:19:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning write James!

James Inman
Date: 10/20/2015 7:58:00 AM

Thanks Dr. Sharma.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/17/2015 1:10:00 AM

Beautiful and clever James. Congrats on your win!!!!

James Inman
Date: 10/20/2015 7:57:00 AM

Thanks again Michael.

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/16/2015 7:57:00 PM

Wow......this is excellent, James! I had a hard time thinking of an eight letter title, that would give me inspiration. Wish I'd thought of this one !! Well done!!

James Inman
Date: 10/20/2015 7:57:00 AM

Carrie, thank you. I actually googled "eight letter words" and this one spoke to me. It actually wound up being a reasonably smooth write.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/16/2015 7:47:00 PM

James, this is good! Congratulations on your win :-)Alexis 7

James Inman
Date: 10/20/2015 7:52:00 AM

Thank you Alexis.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2015 7:33:00 PM

You are one of our newest members who is a poet to be reckoned with. You did such a great job on this challenge. congrats on your well deserved win.

James Inman
Date: 10/20/2015 7:50:00 AM

Hey, Andrea. You swell my head far too much. Sometimes it makes it difficult to live inside of it, but I love it anyway, haha. Thank you for the sweet words.

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/16/2015 4:41:00 PM

Love your creation poem, James. Congrats on your nice win! Sandra

James Inman
Date: 10/20/2015 7:47:00 AM

Thank you so much Sandra!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/16/2015 4:29:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats James:-) hugs Jan xx

James Inman
Date: 10/20/2015 7:46:00 AM

Thanks Jan.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 10/16/2015 4:23:00 PM

this was another one that i really liked from the first time i read it; you've done so well with single syllable words to form a strong poem that is coherent and reads very well - congrats on your win in my contest!

James Inman
Date: 10/20/2015 7:45:00 AM

First, let me apologize for taking so long with this reponse. Thank you Charlotte for the wonderful comment and even more for hosting the contest. I greatly respect those who can host contests, don't know if I will ever be up for it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2015 4:31:00 PM

very well done, my friend. I really like how you did this form!!

Michael Tor

Date: 10/7/2015 6:29:00 PM

Nicely done James, enjoyed reading.

James Inman
Date: 10/20/2015 7:46:00 AM

Thank you, Michael. Always a pleasure to hear from you.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/7/2015 2:26:00 PM

Very cleaver creation James - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

James Inman
Date: 10/7/2015 3:05:00 PM

Cleaver pun Jan. Thank you.

Eric Boddie

Date: 10/7/2015 2:22:00 PM

from nothing to something great....those are the words you create....without thought your muse enters strong....james, the heart is where your words belong....

James Inman
Date: 10/7/2015 3:04:00 PM

Eric, thank you for your wonderful words.