Haiku 4

sheet lightning flashes silhouetting silver clouds-- one star winks bravely Copyright, July 27, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2014 5:43:00 PM

this one deserved to be MUCH higher. Love it, Faye , It uses original thought and great personification.And congrats on the winners' list.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/25/2014 8:58:00 AM

wonderful imagery Faye I especially love the star winking Many congratulations:-) Hugs jan xxx

Earl Schumacker

Date: 8/24/2014 4:33:00 PM

Hi Faye, Very clever Haiku. Nicely done. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Take care. Earl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/24/2014 3:41:00 PM

Faye, Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest "IN THE CLOUDS!" Take care and enjoy my blog, "Pillow Fights" If you like or have the time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/3/2014 7:47:00 PM

I know what you mean by not enough time in the day. Sheet lightning is really cool as is this poem.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 7:19:00 PM

Love it.. Can't wait to close this contest...Linda

Robert Nehls

Date: 7/28/2014 6:48:00 AM

Very good, Faye. Just like in life, one shining star can change our outlook on whatever storm we may be encountering. There is much said in this Haiku, my friend. Enjoyed it.... Robert.

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/28/2014 6:46:00 AM

That is spectacular, I'm sure I'll be back to grats in on the winners list my friend! :)

Faye Gibson
Date: 7/29/2014 3:23:00 PM

Thanks, Casarah...I have been reading some of your recent writes...very good. Hope to get back and comment soon. There just is not enough time in the day!!