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CONFUSION IN DENIAL

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CONFUSION IN DENIAL

In confusion,
Lies illusion..
That remains unseen.
So deeply hidden in your mind,
That it feels like a dream
Feeling so lost and helpless all you can do is scream...
Cause in reality confusion and life are the ultimate team,
That births illusion making life feel and look like a fraudulent scheme..
So my question to u is,  Is anything what it seem??
As u lay there lifeless, I lay with you in hopes that we both will awake...
And this all will have been one of life's bad dreams.........
Or is this simply denial to the extreme....

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  1. Date: 5/24/2011 6:04:00 AM
    Thank you for posting and allowing us to enter into your world of poetry today. The diversity of our poets and their poetry here at PoetrySoup is astounding. It was my pleasure to read your poetry today Kibi. Love, Carol