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Come Alive!

No light does enter a darkened mind that cares not to see the world and its beauty. Open your eyes, now. Do not stand there in the shadows wishing to be more than you are. Take yourself, planting feet to then grow, flourish, dream, just Be!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/30/2008 1:36:00 AM
This is one of the things that I need for me come alive. Great write :) Teri
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Date: 8/30/2008 12:47:00 AM
An excellent write from a talented poet Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome observations & comments
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Date: 8/29/2008 8:50:00 PM
don't mind if I do... :) nicely expressed piece.
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Date: 8/29/2008 7:47:00 AM
Perfectly said....yes, we need to open ourselves and be who we are meant to be! I love the Diminished Hexaverse style of this poem...it ends beautifully!
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