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Colours - the Changing Sky

Changing sky Like a moody child of my race, I visualise hues of changing sky. Woke up with dawn to find the sky amber, A symbol of diplomacy and royal dynasty, Orange chrome obdurant to stay. Overshadowed by clouds as the day progressed, Lacked light, debatable ashen grey sky, Disheartening as the mood goes dull and gloomy. Clouds flew with the haboob to unveil cyanic sky, Clear blue of pure thoughts as the deeper ocean, Imbibing peace into my veins. As the sun reaches its vertex, Shining lustrous blonde golden sky, Exceptionally promising and evoking fortune. Universe goes calm with the sunset, That's twilight of reddish yellow sky, All longings reaching to rest. As I envisage sky disappear into darkness, The eyes go blind, looking into zero, Sky awaits moon to prove its very being. Written on 4/7/13 For contest- Changing Sky Sponsor- Gail Angel Doyle Now for contest- Colours Sponsor- Shadow Hamilton Awarded 4th place win

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Date: 6/27/2014 6:55:00 AM
Lovely
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Date: 6/27/2014 6:23:00 AM
Splendid write, Upma, congrats!!!
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Date: 6/27/2014 6:17:00 AM
What a fantastic observation "Sky awaits moon to prove its very being" and its beauty
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Date: 6/26/2014 8:50:00 PM
Oh MY, this is another one that I would say is among my very favorite on the winners' list. VERY beautiful how you took the sky from morning to night. congrats on your win.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/26/2014 9:05:00 PM
Thanks Andrea! So glad u selected as ur fav !
Date: 6/26/2014 8:36:00 PM
colours around us affect us from within. congrats for the win, Upma. Mohan
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/26/2014 9:04:00 PM
True Mohan! Many thanks !
Date: 6/26/2014 5:53:00 PM
descriptive and beautiful Dr Upma congrats on placing 4th ty for taking part hugs
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/26/2014 9:03:00 PM
Thnx Shadow ! Glad u liked this one !
Date: 6/26/2014 5:24:00 PM
You enchant me with your bold splashes of colour, Upma! A rush of hues displayed from dawn till night arrives. Lovely and expressive. Congratulations!! // paul
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/26/2014 9:01:00 PM
Thnx Paul ! Glad u liked my changing hues ! Honoured !
Date: 7/24/2013 1:56:00 PM
, love your changing sky winning poem... :-) Congratulations (-: ~SKAT~
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/26/2014 8:59:00 PM
Thanks Skat for an always wanting support!
Date: 7/23/2013 3:19:00 PM
A fabulous take on this contest. Congratulations on your fabulous win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 6/26/2014 8:58:00 PM
Thnx Connie for ur lovely wishes!
Date: 7/5/2013 11:42:00 PM
Hello mamiji :) Nice to see you here. Wow!! you write so amazing poems:)
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/5/2013 11:46:00 PM
Thanks vandana ! I hav read some fine poetry by you too, that reminds me of my college days. That time there was no web, no soup. Gud luck VANDANA...... See u on soup !!!

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