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Colour Blindness - Miltonic Sonnet

Showcase of my favourite painted collection, a Piled up for years, eventually being inaugurated, b Without fail, what if colours were amalgamated ? b No one could ever unveil my apprehension, a Heart pouncing, breaths endured expansion, a More and more to the colours as I concentrated, b My senses shivered and swiftly hibernated, b My passion, my hobby could not be my profession ! a Neutral to doctor's innocuous advice on colour, c Who proved out the reception on retina as deficient, d Creator himself had prejudiced me in chromacy, e Dreams of painting vibrant having lost all valour, c As literary gained power, hues became munificent, d Enriched in colors, now could be a pen's supremacy ! e Written on 5/5/14 Sponsor- Craig Cornish Contest- Miltonic sonnet

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Date: 5/12/2014 5:22:00 PM
Good command of language I enjoyed
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Date: 5/5/2014 9:59:00 AM
this is beautiful : )
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/6/2014 8:55:00 AM
Thnx for passing by Jack !

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