Color of the Wind

Your love is like the color of the wind Where you surely have lovely green flared eyes The air burns with a hot flare from above Rage fires from deep within like one despised Harmony displays not one keen aspect She opens not my mind but my pure heart May my hair envelope, my souls escape To fill my cup with the divine impart Her eyes, a beauty that I can’t dispel She takes me down into the fiery depths Passion is king and love’s an afterthought No matter my happy heart, I have wept It goes deeper than any caves around Love goes beyond the boundaries we set The wind plays it part within the grand scheme I hope to always see and not forget The sunlight brings cheer to our tender lives Where the air burns like fire bringing passion Love harbors cloudless skies that’s softly here Where it all has brought love in pure action
Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 6/15/2013 7:50:00 PM
Beautiful .....
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Date: 6/15/2013 12:02:00 PM
this is wonderful, Russell
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Date: 6/14/2013 12:36:00 PM
Russell, you penned another beauty, I just love the visuals you bring forth. ;) I hope your weekend will be a great one. Hugs Wilma
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Date: 6/14/2013 6:57:00 AM
I was drawn to this one by the title and was not dissapointed. Well done Russell
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Date: 6/13/2013 8:27:00 PM
Impressive!
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Date: 6/13/2013 2:45:00 PM
As Gail said, you are a true romantic my friend. Should be back up to speed in a week or so! Cheers, Jack
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Date: 6/13/2013 2:43:00 PM
Very expressive and emotive work..This green eyed woman must be special to you..If for a contest, it should be in the winner's list..Enjoyed reading it today..Thanks for the stops by my work..Sara
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Date: 6/13/2013 12:33:00 PM
My favorite line is the line Timothy wrote about...Passion is king and love's an afterthought! That line just struck me with it's beauty and grace! :)
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Date: 6/13/2013 10:35:00 AM
- A beautiful way to describe it , Russell! - As always: Perfect! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/13/2013 10:17:00 AM
"Passion is king and love’s an afterthought" << you seem to have the right idea with lines like this. She sounds like quite the lucky lady. And I suppose the wind does have a color... the kind of color that's left for your imagination to run wild.
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Date: 6/13/2013 9:52:00 AM
Wow, totally enamored by this wondrous piece ever glowing with passion lit... a lovely offering that spells of magic, russell... shine on; fascinating!.:) huggs
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