Cold In the Soul

Cold In The Soul I feel cold in my soul - for frozen has been my heart. Just for a misunderstanding that has caused me great pain and kepted us apart. My heart has been wounded and my eyes have cried of sadness and pain. What was it that I did, that I do not understand? Dear God up in heaven help me - please take this cold of my soul and give warmth to my heart. This cold that I feel I can not avoid it. Please give peace to my soul and melt the ice from my heart. Come quick and help me and let me feel your love. The cold that we feel in our bodies - that we can overcome. But the cold we feel in our souls - that's the one that can make us cry and tear us apart. It is true and it has been written, that whoever is without sin, to cast the first stone. Is it you that feels cold in the soul, or is it me? Maybe it's you and maybe it's I. Let's give one step forward so we can make peace. Do you want to start, or do you want me to go first? The important thing is that we start and end this cold that we have in our souls, so that we can have peace once again....
06/20/2013 Written by lucilla M. carrillo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 6/27/2013 6:34:00 PM
Hi Lucy, Hope you're feeling better, you have posted some writes and I see that as a good sign. I love how your poems always leave me thinking and this is no exception. Take care, Richard
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Date: 6/22/2013 5:29:00 PM
It's great that you wrote it in English. You should let people know the spanish version is above it. They might not know by the title that it's the same.
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Date: 6/22/2013 11:03:00 AM
The last two lines are very beautiful and I agree. Very nice poem, my friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/21/2013 1:36:00 AM
I liked the humility and introspection portrayed in this. I remember you telling us recently that you were in the hospital and that it was serious. Hoe you are feeling better today! God bless..
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Date: 6/20/2013 9:28:00 PM
He will turn up the heat for you my friend (I mean that in a good way), he will make it comfortable and warm for you! There is always a certain comfort whenever we are around Him, may your heart find Him and be comforted! Your message brings the faith into light and truth is revealed! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 6/20/2013 2:45:00 PM
Dearest Lucy, God's heart is always warm because GOD IS LOVE! He never turns anyone's prayer down and certainly not yours since you ask with so much sincerity! Be certain things will turn out fine for you because HE has blessed you!
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