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Coke Zero

Coke Zero is now my soft drink of choice Zero calories is the key to success Some genius on high finally figured it out Coke without calories is the best! The guy that came up with this brilliant stroke Earned a dirty big bunch of Coke shares For blokes like me who are trying to cut down It's the answer to us guy's prayers Now all we're missing is a Caramilk Zero That would surely complete the trend Imagine a chocolate bar that's healthy for you I'd stick to this diet to the end “That's pretty silly!” I heard someone say “A chocolate bar without the bad stuff” Relax my good fellows it's only a dream Convincing us would surely be tough So I really don't think it's such a great idea But I'd give 'em a high five for trying Downside of attempting to lose some weight For all that bad stuff I'd be dying © Jack Ellison 2013

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  1. Date: 6/12/2013 5:45:00 AM

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 1:25:00 PM
    I believe I have to agree with Carol on this one. The ads like to exalt the fact it has no calories, but there's been many studies on the artificial sweeteners. And in the long run it's actually a lot worse for you. That being said, I do like Coke Zero's cinnamon-like flavor... it's got more kick than regular Coke. Though I wouldn't drink it for health reasons... lol!

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 8:24:00 AM
    Dragon and I are tired of diet drinks(Mike is a diabetic). So we drink water on ice and fruit juice mixed with water on ice. Some times I just want to get away from all those artificial sweeteners we have in every thing. Check on the bottle... If it has aspertane... that's neutrosweet... Too much of those sweeteners is not good for you... No we're not health nuts... just stay in my Hubby's diabetic world with him... But when I gave up sugar... I stopped gaining a couple pounds per year.

  1. Date: 6/11/2013 6:55:00 AM
    An amazing write this awesome poem truly is my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening piece here this morning! What a delightful piece this poem truly is Jack! Great Work!!