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Clouds and Roses

Ever touch a fallen star so close it burns from a way down wish of living sleep, sounding out you are completely far apart from the deep of what was the center of your heart? Blame fate Drink it down as love Name it happiness and choose all there is to gain and lose Oh yes, choose... one by one the secrets of your ruse Pile them up as stones one upon another until there is a mountain sky that poses as silent lullaby for the truth along this garden wall so filled to the brim with clouds and roses I remember you as seeds of pain bits of love and fluffs of dreams planted within the cracks of my soul and I pray to God for a perfect rain

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Date: 2/2/2015 10:40:00 AM
So many good lines - "Blame fate...drink it down as love." Love, daver
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Date: 5/6/2013 8:12:00 AM
Interesting and creative work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
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Date: 1/19/2013 5:56:00 AM
Quite a complex write here Karen; I find this a thought provoker.." Saw your comment on one of my older writes, I always try to get back to poets who have commented, I hope you are well at this time, yours Joe..)
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Date: 12/28/2012 1:09:00 PM
Karen, congratulations with your poem featured on this awesome endings week of 2012. Wishing you the best of 2013 to come... luv * Linda
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Date: 2/24/2012 1:50:00 PM
Do not think I`ve read some of yours poem before,this poem I like alot....beautiful Karen! - oxox love Anne-Lise (Norway)
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Date: 2/5/2012 7:09:00 PM
Beautiful, I enjoyed the elegance of your words.
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Date: 2/5/2012 11:22:00 AM
Beautiful poem, thank you so much for sharing! oxox love Laila
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