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Circles - Any Poem Contest

Circles represents, unity wholesomeness No beginning no end,  but what lies within? Is it a protector, like open arms hugging you Maybe  as a captivator, not allowing you to leave. We use a circle to represent the sun Gold is also portrayed as a circle. The element of spirit is shown as a sun showing  superiority to other signs Crop circles true or false Whatever we feel they are beautiful Symmetrical shapes , mysterious In their identify So it is fitting to  use the expression The Circle of Life, although Life has its beginnings and ends Love is represented by a ring. Destiny by a crown of thorns.  Perfection by a  halo Dated july 3 2013

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Date: 7/6/2013 8:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.... Jake
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/8/2013 2:19:00 AM
Thanks Jake ...Seren
Date: 7/6/2013 4:42:00 PM
Seren, simply stunning symbolism and verse...love this one congrats on your win in the contest :)
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Date: 7/8/2013 2:19:00 AM
Hi Karen, thank you ...Seren
Date: 7/6/2013 2:09:00 PM
this is one cool poem, CONGRATS, love Skat
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/8/2013 2:19:00 AM
SKAT many thanks ..Seren
Date: 7/6/2013 4:09:00 AM
Congrats on your creative winning work..Life has a beginning but with humans once they come into being the Spirit lives forever somewhere..Enjoyed reading..Sara
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Date: 7/8/2013 2:20:00 AM
many thanks Sara ...Seren
Date: 7/5/2013 11:17:00 PM
.... congratulations... from:Linda
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Date: 7/8/2013 2:21:00 AM
Thanks Linda ...Seren
Date: 7/4/2013 6:38:00 PM
such simple truth served up divinely Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/8/2013 2:20:00 AM
thank you Shadow ...Seren
Date: 7/3/2013 6:11:00 AM
I love the images you.used to show the many things a circle signifies.I enjoyed reading it all but the last three lines make up to a superb ending-Charma
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/4/2013 8:32:00 AM
Thx Charma, glad you enjoyed it......Seren
Date: 7/3/2013 5:48:00 AM
I really loved the last line, "Perfection by a halo" how true that is! But does that mean angels are perfect? Just a thought! But this poem is near perfect itself my friend! I really loved reading this incredible poem this morning! What a superior piece, quite the delightful poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 7/4/2013 8:31:00 AM
Thx Russell, I suppose being Angelic doesnt make you an Angel. But of course I AM. Lol......Seren

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