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Christmas Windows Vi - Sleigh Ride

Bundled up huddled up and rosy cheeked my wooly-capped son and I listen to the bell-runner's song beneath a lowering sky

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2010 8:27:00 AM

LOVE this one, Daver. Very nice, and I think I saw all your Windows series. LUv, bye now. I have movie day in Salt lake today and I also have to turn Joe's shirts and keys into his old job. (hope I don't get lost up there!!) He is on the road for another company now, trucking in ARizona and his first truck broken air conditioning. This is what I call. Luck of the JOE

Nola Perez

Date: 2/21/2009 8:50:00 AM

Just too good! Make a personal Christmas card next year with poem and descriptive photo. Wow everybody. Nola P.

Celeste Butler-Mendez

Date: 12/16/2008 6:25:00 AM

Christmas was one of my all time favorite holidays. Sounds like it is for you and your son as well. Happy Holidays. Celeste

Date: 12/15/2008 5:02:00 PM

I really enjoyed this one. Sounds like a good time. Keep up the good writing. I wish you a wonderful holiday season. Karen

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 12/13/2008 9:53:00 AM

Awesome, I am right there - literally. lol excellent, more more more, Daver!!! Love these! Kristin

Heidie Buys

Date: 12/13/2008 7:46:00 AM

Whimsical and captivating, a very heart warming poem. Well done Regards Heidie

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/13/2008 5:28:00 AM

'...bundled/huddled/wooly/son/-runner's' ...marvelous assonance! Both warmth and cold juxtapposed. Well done Daver! Best wishes, Keith

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/12/2008 5:02:00 PM

A memory, like a winter holiday card. Almost Norman Rockwell in my mind, but not quite, just so much more. You paint a very strong feeling. It is so rich. Precious moment together, you with your son. A beautiful Christmas Window. Love, Shar