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I am going to turn back the clock of time, to a Christmas when I was six years old; shopping with my mother one day I saw something, it was a life size doll and I fell in love. I talked about her non stop all the long day, and I wrote many letters to Santa (and his wife); my mother kept saying, "wouldn't you like a baby doll?" "no mommy, I want life size Sally!" On Christmas morning I flew down the stairs, the tree was all a glitter and Christmas music played; but no parcel looked big enough for a life size doll, I opened one box to find "stupid" baby doll. My lip was quivering but I did not cry, dad brought a white kitten in his arms for me; but little brother took it and they were playing, so, I went upstairs until mother called. And there was Aunt Mary holding Sally doll, I screamed- she was my "everything" for weeks! then- I picked up baby doll, "she had stuff", a cradle, bottles, clothes- and I fell in love. ____________________________________ December 14, 2016 Poetry/Narrative/Little Girls Fall in Love Easily Copyright Protected, ID 858-132-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym Inspired by the contest, Christmas Day Sponsor, Alexis First Place

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Date: 3/6/2017 10:16:00 PM
Hi BW, Congratulations on your first place win in my Christmas Day contest: -) Alexis
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Date: 3/6/2017 9:27:00 PM
Wonderful poem .Most enjoyable. Love.
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Date: 12/15/2016 6:49:00 AM
yes, kids love things the adults don't like
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Date: 12/15/2016 12:23:00 AM
Excellent. Lovely write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 12/14/2016 7:11:00 PM
Your nice nostalgic poem brings back fond memories when my sister and I had life size dolls called "Patty Playpals," for some reason my Mom got rid of them when we got a little older…Good luck in the contest BW!~Che
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