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Christmas Celebrations - a Constanza

See how Christmas fete on earth Indians will walk to the mass Enjoy curries and sweets enmass Australians hang wreaths girthed Here Santa gives rest to reindeer Changes dress for less ”hot” with cheer. Chinese light streets and stores with mirth Santa is called “Shen Dan Lao Ren” In shops only the grottos plain. Yule logs burned in French hearth With food left, the logs burn all night In case Jesus comes in the night. Russians fast till first star rebirths Then break fast with Kutia eating For good luck throw some up ceiling. Ways and approach differ on earth Call him Christ, Gud, Gott, dieu,dio, God Ishwar, Allah, he’s the same lord. See how Christmas fete on earth Australians hang wreathes girthed Chinese light streets and stores with mirth Yule logs burned in French hearth Russians fast till first star rebirths Ways and approach differ on earth
++++++++++++++++++++++++ **This is my maiden poem in form Constanza** 28-12-13 Dr. Ram Mehta Form:Constanza Motif : Epic Sixth Place win Contest: Impress Me III by Giorgio V.

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Date: 2/19/2014 6:40:00 PM
I really enjoyed this poem. It was interesting to learn about how the holiday is celebrated around the world. A very nice write, Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your win, as well!
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Date: 2/13/2014 4:56:00 AM
Way to go, Dr. Congrats on your fine win!
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Date: 2/12/2014 7:30:00 PM
Interesting write, Congratulations,Dr. Ram!!
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Date: 2/12/2014 1:00:00 PM
Congratulations on the win with the Constanza form Dr Ram you show a medley of honour here, well done Joe..'
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Date: 2/12/2014 3:16:00 AM
- Another contest sponsored by: Giorgio V. - "Impress me IV" - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM,DR.RAM - ENJOYABLE TO READ YOURS AND A PLEASURE TO PARTICIPATE :))) - Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/29/2013 12:29:00 AM
I love learning about diverse cultures and I thank you for trying this form Dr. Metha. Best of luck in the contest. Best wishes for a Happy New Year!
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Date: 12/29/2013 4:46:00 AM
Thanks again. I will be posting the second one soon
Date: 12/28/2013 6:56:00 PM
I like how you worked this one to the last stanza. A great poem, full of global harmony.
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Date: 12/28/2013 6:52:00 PM
Soup mail.
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Date: 12/28/2013 5:23:00 PM
I love the way you presented the various traditions according to cultures. that was a very clever idea, Dr. Ram. Good luck in the contest. I still have not tried it!
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Date: 12/28/2013 4:06:00 PM
- And together we celebrate the birth of Jesus - Nice to read, Dr. Ram. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/28/2013 2:41:00 PM
Dr.Ram a very good first attempt …David
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Date: 12/28/2013 9:06:00 AM
Dear Ram - Thanks for the Christmas ride around the worlds. Very twinkling and informative. love, Kathy
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