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Choosing Whom To Love... Is An Unsolved Dilemma

Choosing whom to love...is an unsolved dilemma, we humans seldom attest; how can love be shared equally among the ones who delight our very heart? I can't love one person more than the other, it's utter unfairness on my part; what troubles me is to whom I'll give the deserving affection that can last... If many haven't loved me or touched me in the simplest, truest way: I can go past that; and wouldn't hold it against them, but what I will tell them is to be my friends and chat. And the saddness of the matter is that friends aren't like God who's ever-present; they live among us for a short while, then they depart to begin their jeourney's quest. Many dark days have see me waiting on someone like a hopeless beggar: bitter, cold and sad; no nickels, dimes or quaters were tossed into my coffee cup I held up with a trembling hand. Fate, unfair fate will there be a time when you'll show me sympathy, and not embitter me? If another chance at being loved were given to me, I wouldn't forfeit it when it accosts me. . Choosing whom to love...is an unsolved dilemma, causing confusion to clearly think and pause; not all can be certain of hearing that they are truly loved by offering them a beautiful rose. Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci

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Date: 11/11/2009 9:17:00 AM
This is truly a thoughtful, poem deeper than a mere love tale. I enjoyed it. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/11/2009 3:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/10/2009 10:14:00 PM
A well written piece. Congratulations on your win. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 9/12/2009 9:47:00 AM
Very interesting observations, Andrew. When I asked the "nuns" why priests couldn't marry, they told me it's because they are supposed to love everyone equally. Each person leaves a special imprint on our lives. Sometimes they do "depart," but I've had friends who've stood by me my whole life. I love them dearly and am ever so grateful to have them. Wonderful writing! Love, Carolyn
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