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Chocolate-Covered Strawberries

The chocolate-covered strawberries Were free, as a promotion. My friend gave me a coupon - "Use it If you've got the notion." I brought them home and ate a few Then stuck them in the freezer. I didn't love them but I said I did, So it would please her. That was a year ago and I'd Forgotten they existed, But when I found them, tossing them Was something I resisted. You see, my friend who'd coupon-shared No longer is alive. It seems ironic that these treats, though, Managed to survive. They hardly take up any room Behind the ice cube tray So that is where, at least for now, Those strawberries will stay.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/23/2016 7:06:00 PM
Won't they develop freezer burn, Ilene? I do not cafe for chocolate covered strawberries, preferring them a la Nature and the homegrown variety which where I live last one month. The store bought kind are tasteless, hard, and expensive. Thanks for reading about the ornithologist. / M
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Date: 7/23/2016 3:43:00 PM
Like the lock of hair we give bereaved parents of stillborn infants, comfort comes from earthly things when others are no longer of this earth Ilene. Beautiful piece.
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Date: 7/22/2016 8:09:00 PM
Hi ilene, wow chocolate covered strawberries, love them and what a lovely piece you have written about them, this is one delightful read my friend as all your reads are. take care........Vera
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Date: 7/22/2016 7:07:00 PM
ilene, how enlightening is this piece.. your story enchants and i like how this was developed... huggs
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Date: 7/22/2016 2:24:00 PM
I'm sure you will always think of her whenever you see them lurking in the freezer - so often it is little things like this that stick in our mind and remind us of those no longer with us:-) hugs jan xx
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