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he's holding her hand cheerleader beyond the glass his knight takes my queen 02/03/16

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Date: 2/23/2016 7:09:00 PM
Very cleverly done 575 SENRYU... '...his knight takes my queen,' a superb ending line! BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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James Inman
Date: 2/23/2016 8:32:00 PM
Thank you for the kind comment Keith.
Date: 2/11/2016 4:59:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write James.
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James Inman
Date: 2/11/2016 7:51:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 2/11/2016 2:18:00 AM
Congratulations James on your win with this clever senryu!
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James Inman
Date: 2/11/2016 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Susan.
Date: 2/10/2016 2:21:00 PM
congrats on your win James:-) hugs jan xx
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James Inman
Date: 2/10/2016 2:48:00 PM
Thanks Jan.
Date: 2/10/2016 10:04:00 AM
Thanks for the reply
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Date: 2/10/2016 8:27:00 AM
James, congratulations on your Let's Hear It win. LINDA
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James Inman
Date: 2/10/2016 10:02:00 AM
Hi PD, thank you.
Date: 2/8/2016 12:09:00 AM
Losing your queen....Checkmate...
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James Inman
Date: 2/8/2016 6:49:00 AM
Thanks for the visit, Pashang.
Date: 2/6/2016 9:23:00 PM
:) LINDA
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Date: 2/6/2016 7:39:00 PM
Wow is this ever clever James! Take a bow my friend! Bravo! #7 a Fave!
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James Inman
Date: 2/7/2016 12:16:00 AM
Thank you Connie, what a sweet comment
Date: 2/3/2016 10:33:00 PM
James, thank you for the kind reply. Thanks for liking my new smile. LINDA
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James Inman
Date: 2/4/2016 9:51:00 AM
Always, PD.
Date: 2/3/2016 9:17:00 PM
oh, I love how you did this. But I have to warn you. I once did a tanka that I though was quite good for one of Judy's contests like this one and she she left me off her winners' list for "not working hard" (hope it does not happen to you, my friend)
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James Inman
Date: 2/4/2016 10:12:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, what will be will be.
Date: 2/3/2016 6:32:00 PM
enjoyed your Senryu James:) @-> LINDA <-@
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James Inman
Date: 2/3/2016 8:57:00 PM
Thank you PD. Like your new smiling Avatar.
Date: 2/3/2016 3:01:00 PM
Awesome! What a clever way to address this theme. BG
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James Inman
Date: 2/3/2016 8:56:00 PM
Thank you Barbara.
Date: 2/3/2016 1:52:00 PM
Unique take on the theme James! good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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James Inman
Date: 2/3/2016 2:04:00 PM
Hi Jan. It's probably not what she's looking for but I gave it shot. Thanks for dropping by.

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