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Cherry-Pits and Foggy Air

anxiety, care, corruption, creation, destiny, environment, rainforest, CHERRY-PITS AND FOGGY AIR© Miseries mount on high If only I had that again Too little too late too much Life’s no bowl of cherries And the rain fell hard today! Skies sheathed in dust and smog Pollutes the once green terrain below The ‘fresh’ air demotes to shallower breaths Intakes ‘tanked’ to partings of out rage The taste of ‘bottled’ flavoured water rises The ‘breaths’ of air when bottled will increase And next it will be one costly ‘purification’ deed For those left and known to mankind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/28/2015 2:14:00 PM
i AM SO PLEASED you liked my word/work---just love playing with words. They are so therapeutic are they not! Cheaper than a psychiatrist and you don't even have to dress up to go out! So pleased to have shared and love to receive your complements.
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Date: 5/28/2015 1:54:00 PM
deep poetry
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Diane M Quinlan
Date: 5/28/2015 2:17:00 PM
Always a treat to hear from you my poet friend......thank you for reading my shared word'work piece today.....didee
Date: 5/28/2015 9:40:00 AM
Nice poem. Lovely choice of words!
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Diane M Quinlan
Date: 5/31/2015 11:50:00 AM
Thanks for another one of your great comments. Glad you liked it!

Book: Shattered Sighs