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Yesterday it was clever for me to take responsibility Admittedly it was a total effort of futility I believed you and the world at large Would be much better off if I were in charge If people would change I would be happy I tried and I tried until I was totally wacky Today I'm a little bit wiser and can see People will be who they are - it's not up to me If I think I know what others should do It's time for a change in myself and not you.
“Yesterday I was clever, so I wanted to change the world. Today I am wise, so I am changing myself…” – Rumi Written 12/3/2015 for 'Quote Me Rumi Contest' of Silent One 1st Place

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Date: 12/9/2015 8:36:00 PM
You really captured the essence of the quote here. I see it won. Congratulations.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/20/2015 7:19:00 AM
Thank you Andrea!
Date: 12/5/2015 11:02:00 PM
This is great, Congrats on your win. SuZ
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/7/2015 12:38:00 AM
TY!
Date: 12/5/2015 1:11:00 AM
I see I was right, congratulations on your win.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/7/2015 12:37:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 12/4/2015 2:03:00 PM
Nice wisdom here, and beautifully written, Susan. Congratulations on your top win. Hugs, Sandra
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/7/2015 12:36:00 AM
Thanks Sandra. You're very kind.
Date: 12/4/2015 11:31:00 AM
L love this!! Congratulations!!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/7/2015 12:35:00 AM
Why thank you#
Date: 12/4/2015 6:05:00 AM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Susan. Very wise words. Change starts with myself.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/7/2015 12:33:00 AM
TY! Not usually what we want to hear though. :).
Date: 12/3/2015 11:08:00 PM
Very nice, congrats on your win.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/7/2015 12:34:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 12/3/2015 10:39:00 PM
Congrats on ur top place win with this wonderful write Susan!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/7/2015 12:32:00 AM
Why thank you#
Date: 12/3/2015 6:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/7/2015 12:30:00 AM
TY Eve!
Date: 12/3/2015 5:25:00 PM
Very cleverly penned Susan many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/7/2015 12:27:00 AM
Thank you Jan for lovely comment.
Date: 12/3/2015 5:15:00 PM
Susan, Congratulations on your Quoting Rumi Win. SKAT ** Love
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/7/2015 12:25:00 AM
Thank you much!
Date: 12/3/2015 10:16:00 AM
Impressive! I think Silent will appreciate this one. Thanks for reading and commenting on my moms poetry.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 12/7/2015 12:24:00 AM
ahh TY! You were right, he did. like it :) Oh I enjoy her work. Can relate to her experiences. She pours her heart out. Give your mom a hug...

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