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Cat From Hell

Cat From Hell Back in the day a young girl married an older man. It was an arranged marriage. She spent most of her time alone in the house. Her husband worked and dranked a lot. One day she found a little black kitten, she took him home, fed him and from then on - he was her companion. She loved him, but her husband hated him cause he was always with her. He would kick him every time he saw him. The husband had already turned into an alcaholic. He did not work much anymore, so he would take any money that his wife was able to save. One day he met a wine taster and brought him home. Right away the man liked the wife and she liked him too. After that he would come over when the husband went out drinkinfg. Soon The husband's friend and the wife became lovers. one day the husband came home early and found them in bed. he beat them up, tied them to the wall, when they woked up, they saw that he was building a brick wall around them. He was burying them alive. The police were looking for the wine Taster. he was a famous man. They heard he was friends with the alcaholic man and went to his house. They searched everywhere. They went to the basement and saw that everything was very clean. As they were leaving - they heard a cat's MEOW and started tearing down the wall. The cat was there with his master. The man thought he had commited the perfect crime, but The CAT FROM HELL gave him away.... C/center> 09/20/2013 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

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  1. Date: 10/19/2013 12:59:00 PM
    What a lovely story, Lucilla. You're a great storyteller. I was gripped right to the end. Well done, my friend. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 4:28:00 PM
    Pussy cat, pussy cat where have you been, saving my mistress from not being seen. Pussy cat, pussy cat what did you there, meowed from the wall to make cops aware. lol Murderous write Lucy, you devil haha. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 9:44:00 PM
    LoL....I got a real kick out of this. Never kick a black cat!!!!! nice story.

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 12:32:00 AM
    Wow Great story.The things people do for love

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 8:25:00 AM
    Great story. Stanza two change fad to fed, in final stanza change living to leaving. You are a good story teller, I enjoyed this tale.

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 8:37:00 AM
    Wow loved this one! My neighbor is a wine taster, he always has a black cat with him where ever he goes, now I know why!!! :)

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 7:53:00 AM

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 1:23:00 AM
    Excellent. Nice story. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 10:59:00 PM
    This is a very delightful scary story and poem to read my dear friend Lucy. I enjoyed so much reading it this morning. Thank you so much for sharing my very dear friend. Good luck and best wishes always not only in the contest but in everything! Big big sweetest hugs to you! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 7:03:00 PM
    Oh my...what a surprise ending and a great cat friend! Loved it Lucilla

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 12:07:00 PM
    broodingly inventive, lucy... love the surprise at the end... :) huggs

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 11:16:00 AM
    Buen Dia Lucilla, An entertaining Halloween write you penned here..Well done mi amiga..Thanks for visiting my work today.. Respecto, Ken

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 8:05:00 AM
    like this, excellent poetry

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 6:58:00 AM
    Very nice Lucilla.... love and big hugs, Jack xoxox

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  1. Date: 9/21/2013 3:40:00 AM
    What a story! Life surpasses imagination sometimes with the writers help! Good luck, Lucy! Thank you!

  1. Date: 9/21/2013 1:18:00 AM
    hahaha. I love that cat from hell you inserted into the story. And it had that POE feeling to it!

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:41:00 PM
    A great story penned beautifully. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 8:53:00 PM
    This is pretty creepy Lucilla, I enjoyed reading it , Russell will love it xxx

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:52:00 AM
    Great story, Lucilla. Love it!