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Cat I see him by the old oak door, and he is wet and sad it seems. His fur is jet. Can not ignore his paw is red, and in sunbeams, I see he is one to deplore. For now, I see the sad extreme of the bad way he's in...has sore on his one paw, and by all means may be a pet of one nearby. To get up now he can not try, for his bad paw can not comply. Now, sad I am for him, so that I run to get wet rag and mat to be a doc for pussycat. Sandra M. Haight ~9th Place~ Contest: The Funom's Sonnet Sponsor: Funom Makama Judged: 04/20/2016 Rules: all words must contain only three letters or less, except for end rhyme words. Lines must have 7 or 8 syllables. Rhyme scheme: a-b-a-b a-b-a-b c-c-c-d d-d Note: the word cannot may also be spelled can not

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Date: 4/28/2016 12:41:00 AM
Sandra, Congratulations on your "FUNOM'S SONNET win." LINDA
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Date: 4/22/2016 7:31:00 PM
What a wonderful poem, congratulations on your win!!!!!
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Date: 4/20/2016 10:45:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Sandra..
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Date: 4/20/2016 1:24:00 PM
Sandra, congrats on your placement in the contest...Very well written :)-luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/20/2016 4:03:00 PM
Thank you very much, Laura. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/20/2016 12:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win and thank you very much for giving this very fine entry. The contest had lots of wonderful entries and grading them was a hard nut to crack, nevertheless you came out tops.. Kudos to you and thank you so much once again.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/20/2016 4:03:00 PM
Funom, thanks for an inspiring contest. I enjoyed participating and thank you for my nice placement. Sandra
Date: 3/18/2016 11:35:00 AM
What an honour! Great, great, great honour! to be getting some wonderful and master class entries. You guys are even better than I am in this challenge. Great work
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Date: 3/14/2016 10:25:00 PM
Looks pretty intense, but I think you have figured it out. Very nice job with a difficult challenge. Peace dear lady:)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/15/2016 7:17:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel. Glad you like it. It was difficult but fun to work out. Sandra
Date: 3/14/2016 8:59:00 PM
Methinks you mastered the Funon sonnet. NICELY done, I really like it.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/15/2016 7:17:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Lots of fun working it out! Hugs, Sandra

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