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Love Is Eternal

Love is Eternal Castle on the hill top left abandoned Three Hundred years ago King-Queen crazy couple spent honeymoon in this castle leaving memories. We the modern couple chanced to visit empty castle on fading twilight. Breeze whistling through pain stricken broken window panes. No doors to obstruct. We ventured, entered,sensed romantic aroma searching for enigma in each nook of castle. Descent Crescent Moon appeared. Three Hundred years ere reminiscences flashed back. King-Queen of castle entered on re-incarnation. Love is eternal. 04/23/16 Free Verse on Love Contest by Laura Loo

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Augustus Black

Date: 5/3/2016 7:34:00 PM

Wow! What a great peaceful write! I adore this poem with all my heart. The wording and flow here is quite fantastic. I definitely want to explore the castle now. Well done. Keep on going. 7/7

Anisha Dutta
Date: 5/4/2016 12:06:00 PM

Thanks Augustus for appreciation

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2016 12:20:00 PM

Would be nice to go in a castle and feel like its queen and king. You should call this free verse, Anisha. Some of the syllable count are too many for haiku. Also if you do free verse style, you can be more free in your story telling!

Anisha Dutta
Date: 5/4/2016 12:08:00 PM

I cannot be too particular about syllabus count

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/23/2016 3:33:00 PM

Some great imagery Anisha. Most enjoyable.

Anisha Dutta
Date: 5/4/2016 12:09:00 PM

Thanks Lenny

Lu Loo

Date: 4/23/2016 1:58:00 PM

Anisha, perfect for the contest!! good luck lady :)-luloo

Anisha Dutta
Date: 4/23/2016 2:02:00 PM

Thanks Laura for quick visit. love.