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Cast Off Thoughts

Cast off, thoughts of yesterday, of childhood and innocence. Leave behind, silly dreams. They hold no place in the present. Of child hood and innocence, I use to believe. They hold no place in the present, where reality is all, it seems. I use to believe, they held a power all their own, where reality is all it seems, on this side of the looking glass. They held a power all their own. Perhaps, I could reach out, on this side of the looking glass. Maybe then, I will recall. Perhaps, I could reach out? Leave behind silly dreams? Maybe then I will recall, cast of thoughts, of yesterday.
For the contest "Write A Poem For Yourself" Sponsored by Carol Brown Placement: 2nd

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Date: 9/30/2011 11:22:00 PM
Congrats Paula on sweet success in this contest with beautiful words of poetry so intense and special my friend..luv..
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Date: 9/30/2011 7:30:00 PM
Lovely Pantoum. Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/30/2011 6:31:00 PM
You did yourself proud Paula. Congratulations I enjoyed the poem you wrote for yourself. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/29/2011 11:34:00 PM
what a great poem not only for Irma, but for Carol's contest. You pantoum wizard you!! Congratulations.
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Date: 9/29/2011 12:55:00 PM
Congratulations onn the win in the contest of P.D., Paula
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Date: 9/29/2011 11:42:00 AM
Congrats Paula on another fabulous win for this fantastic poetry my friend.. another great write..luv.
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Date: 9/29/2011 11:15:00 AM
PAULA~~Congratulations on your posted poem of the week. God bless,..p.d.
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Date: 9/29/2011 10:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Your Best Poem this Week" contest Paula. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/27/2011 6:58:00 PM
You did very well creating a poem just as Carol desired! Done perfectly, wonderful poem!!
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Date: 9/27/2011 6:09:00 PM
maybe so... i bow, paula. ~n
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