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Cast Off Thoughts

Cast off, thoughts of yesterday, of childhood and innocence. Leave behind, silly dreams. They hold no place in the present. Of child hood and innocence, I use to believe. They hold no place in the present, where reality is all, it seems. I use to believe, they held a power all their own, where reality is all it seems, on this side of the looking glass. They held a power all their own. Perhaps, I could reach out, on this side of the looking glass. Maybe then, I will recall. Perhaps, I could reach out? Leave behind silly dreams? Maybe then I will recall, cast of thoughts, of yesterday.
For the contest "Write A Poem For Yourself" Sponsored by Carol Brown Placement: 2nd

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  1. Date: 9/30/2011 11:22:00 PM
    Congrats Paula on sweet success in this contest with beautiful words of poetry so intense and special my friend..luv..

  1. Date: 9/30/2011 7:30:00 PM
    Lovely Pantoum. Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 9/30/2011 6:31:00 PM
    You did yourself proud Paula. Congratulations I enjoyed the poem you wrote for yourself. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/30/2011 3:11:00 PM
    A very deep, introspective pantoum here, Paula. Hmmmm, it almost dips into an empty sort of angst, but manages to come out of the tailspin. Great thoughts! Boy oh boy, your muse has really been grabbing hold of you lately, eh?

  1. Date: 9/29/2011 11:34:00 PM
    what a great poem not only for Irma, but for Carol's contest. You pantoum wizard you!! Congratulations.

  1. Date: 9/29/2011 12:55:00 PM
    Congratulations onn the win in the contest of P.D., Paula

  1. Date: 9/29/2011 11:42:00 AM
    Congrats Paula on another fabulous win for this fantastic poetry my friend.. another great write..luv.

  1. Date: 9/29/2011 11:15:00 AM
    PAULA~~Congratulations on your posted poem of the week. God bless,..p.d.

  1. Date: 9/29/2011 10:09:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Your Best Poem this Week" contest Paula. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/27/2011 6:58:00 PM
    You did very well creating a poem just as Carol desired! Done perfectly, wonderful poem!!

  1. Date: 9/27/2011 6:09:00 PM
    maybe so... i bow, paula. ~n