Cashew and the Boy

cashew, sweet cashew Staining by shoe Making mother blue.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/11/2011 12:25:00 PM

Creatively cute Charles and a wonderful title too ... enjoyed this entertaining write with luv..my friend..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/7/2011 10:02:00 PM

Cute little rhymes, Charles. I just love cashews!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/7/2011 2:01:00 PM

Oh, such a cute image, Charles. You have a gem here. Love, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/7/2011 10:45:00 AM

This made me smile! I do believe we would call this a senryu! Because it's about human beings and is a bit wry and humorous. Both haiku & senryu do not use capital letters or punctuation, also they do not have titles [the first line may be put in the space provided for a title on the soup poem entry form] EXCELLENT senryu...if you could spare a limerick for my animal limerick contests for children it would be a big help! I only need 2 more! phew! Light & Love

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/7/2011 6:53:00 AM

I am not familiar with this expression but I do like cashews (that is the edible type). the second line should be 7 syllables. love mom

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/4/2011 10:44:00 AM

a smart, enjoyable read, charles! fascinating with best wishes in the contest..:) huggs, nette