Cascading Black, Down Her Back

Purple in dress, wows Cascading black, down her back She turns, tanned beauty .

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Date: 11/13/2014 12:12:00 PM

All the guys are going to envy this vision..Exceellent Haiku!!

James Fraser
Date: 11/13/2014 1:57:00 PM

Thank you Charmaine. A vision I'd like to witness one day, James :) :) hugs :) :)

Date: 11/12/2014 9:42:00 AM

Oho just imagine!" tanned beauty"..Great haiku. Loved it. God bless James.LOVE..rajat

James Fraser
Date: 11/12/2014 2:16:00 PM

Many thanks Rajat for your kind words, much appreciated, James

Date: 11/12/2014 2:17:00 AM

affront she stares.... eyes beguiled in hues of joys.... tears sprung from his eyes... // beautiful haiku!

James Fraser
Date: 11/12/2014 2:09:00 PM

Thank you Olive. It's about an image I see of a lovely girl wearing a purple dress, James :)

Date: 11/11/2014 7:32:00 PM

Can you get her phone number for me ... :)

James Fraser
Date: 11/12/2014 11:21:00 AM

Nice to see you back here Casarah :) James

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/12/2014 9:44:00 AM

Casarah have you got the phone number?

Date: 11/11/2014 4:55:00 PM

ooh sensual - lovely imagery James:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser
Date: 11/11/2014 5:00:00 PM

She in Purple, an Image I desire. I think once seen, my heart will be on fire, I hope - James :) xxx