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Bye -Bye Becca Good-Bye

Bye -Bye Becca good- bye, but why, it’s not clear? How can we dance if you leave my sweet dear? You’re a big girl; your life, your choice, your year Come with me and enjoy the dance and cheer How can we dance if you leave my sweet dear? Time to let loose, take your first batch of beer Come with me and enjoy the dance and cheer Would there be a chance, will you consider? Time to let loose, take your first batch of beer Ignore childish gibberish their insignificance Would there be a chance, will you consider? Just keep in mind you make a difference Ignore childish gibberish their insignificance From time to time risk is necessary Just keep in mind you make a difference Respect you deserve in your sanctuary From time to time risk is necessary You’re a big girl; your life, your choice, your year Respect you deserve in your sanctuary Bye -Bye Becca good- bye, but why, it’s not clear? It is so frustrating having everyone always telling you what you could or couldn’t do
10/3/2016 unmetered Pantoum

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Date: 3/13/2020 10:00:00 PM
This is such a sweet poem, Eve. YOU are sweet. I love how you make people feel so welcome here. Big hugs
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Date: 3/13/2020 10:39:00 PM
People like you make this place very special ..
Date: 10/18/2016 8:04:00 AM
I am honored that you wrote a Pantoum for me! And with beer and dancing! Eve, you are so encouraging, thank you so much for that. It's people like you who keep me coming back. I just have to give my muse a little time. Big hugs
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Date: 10/18/2016 9:24:00 AM
You're so sweet and blessed with talent . The beer an dance to have lots of fun hugs
Date: 10/17/2016 9:39:00 PM
Congrats on your win Eve...lovely write
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Date: 10/17/2016 10:24:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph, :) Hugs Eve
Date: 10/17/2016 12:22:00 PM
Congrats Eve to win on this wonderful piece. I expect Becca must appreciate.Hugs.
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Date: 10/17/2016 10:25:00 PM
Thank you, Anisha :) Hugs Eve
Date: 10/7/2016 6:17:00 PM
Eve, very nice , I hope she reads this ~
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/17/2016 10:26:00 PM
Thank you, Broken Wings, :) Hugs Eve
Date: 10/6/2016 7:08:00 AM
Excellent and well penned poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/17/2016 10:27:00 PM
Thank you, Ravi, :) Hugs Eve
Date: 10/4/2016 5:45:00 AM
Brilliant and lovely ...
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/4/2016 3:34:00 PM
thank you, Probir.. she is a good person Hugs
Date: 10/3/2016 5:36:00 PM
Brilliant form to use for your contest poem Eve - I do hope Becca just takes a break and stays on soup:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/4/2016 3:36:00 PM
thank you , Jan, people just need to keep to their own business and not others... Hugs Eve

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