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PART One,,,, as she saw it.

The mountains and the meadows were always so beautiful this time of year.
 It seemed as if a fresh new world always came to life. The high cliffs turned sharply downward.  As I sat listening to the ocean tides smashing against the walls of the mountain below. There was a mild breeze blowing from the south. The grass in the flower covered meadows moved with the breeze. The sun shined so brightly I thought it would melt me at times.

As I stood up from the log where I was sitting by the emerald forest, the breeze pressed my dress against me. It formed to the soft round curves of my breast, down through the curves of my waist pushing against my yielding hips. As I blinked from the sun, I saw him there in the distance. I had thought I was alone. But there he was,  starring straight at me. What would I do and where could I turn? I knew what kinds of thoughts men had, my mother told me all about them. I saw that he was beginning to move my way !

 I saw him there as he saw me. I was paralyzed, not knowing what direction to move. Though as I watched him from afar, he did not seem dangerous as my mother always warned. Still, I could hear her words like a tape recorder in the back of my mind.
 Should I dare take my eyes from his? I could see his eyes were dark, maybe brown, or even midnight blue.  What ever the color, I could tell they were smoldering with restrained passions. His hair was long to his shoulder blades. I knew that because it moved with the wind.  He had broad shoulders with long legs. I knew I must not let him reach me. If his arms entangled me , surely I would never get loose. And, I'm not sure I would want too. Even though I heard the words of my mother, running in my head.
 I could feel the tiny  beads of sweat trickling down between my breasts. I was not sure I should take my eyes from him as I leaned down to pick up the fan that had slipped from my hand to my bare feet.

PART ONE,,,, As he saw it .

  The winter snow had melted and yielded to the bright warming rays of the spring sun.  The bears had come out of hibernation with their  new born looking for food. The mountains and the meadows were born again, new, fresh and alive with life.  Everything was beautiful and as it should be. Birds singing, their mating songs blended with the crash of the surf against the steep cliffs of the mountain. Nature was at peace with itself, and I came here to share in this peace.  To be alone with the earth, or so I thought.  

I found a place to sit on the grass hidden among the flowers in the high meadows.  So I could enjoy the gentle breeze blowing while watching the forest animals. The warm sun caressed my body and warmed me. It was a prefect day, yet something was missing. A day like this needed to be shared with someone, someone special.  Stretching,  I caught a slight movement out of the corner of my eye, just across the enchanted forest. Of a beautiful women. It couldn't be possible as no one knew of this place. I had come here for years and had never seen a another person before. Yet, there she was. Dressed in a dress the wind made love to, pressing it to her body. Clinging to the sensual curves of her breast, down to her firm waist and full inviting hips. I suddenly felt drawn to her and stood up. I knew she had seen me as she was starring back at me, as I stood staring back at her. She was a vision. And I was afraid she would vanish if I approached her. Yet, she seemed to be smiling, calling to me as I started walking towards her. I remember the stories my grandmother had told me of the enchantresses that lived in this forest, but I did not hesitate. I would give to her anything she wanted, anything she desired.

As I approached her I realized she was real. She seemed to be looking at me, daring me to come closer. All the stories of the enchantress my grandmother had told me flooded my mind with a warning. Yet, she was so beautiful, so inviting  and I couldn't take my eyes from her. I was slowly losing control with each and every step that brought me closer to her. I knew I was lost as I felt the heat of my desire to be with her, starting to take control. It was a struggle not to run to this beautiful creature , with the golden hair, and angelic face.  As I came closer I couldn't help but notice her sensual breasts rising and falling with each breath she took. She seemed to be smiling, challenging me with everything that made her a beautiful, desirable woman. A woman this sensual, this beautiful, this desirable was surely the enchantress, and I was hers. As a bee is drawn to the flower, I was being drawn to this women.

Suddenly she reached down to pick something up. It was just then I noticed she was barefoot.  As she bent over to retrieve what she had dropped, the sun reflected off her spun gold hair. and radiated a golden brightness that was almost blinding.  Her dress shifted  allowing me to see that her body enhanced her dress, rather then the dress enhancing her body. She would look beautiful in anything she wore.  The heat of my desire for her was beginning to consume me with it's fire. I felt the beginnings of ,,,,,,,,,,   


   Nov. 18 1992,,,, Short story I started to write, A friend ask if he could write from a males point of view.

Copyright © Debbie Duncan

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  1. Date: 8/20/2013 2:01:00 AM
    love is grand and time is spanned, and love has it should... great one babe

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 8/20/2013 9:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Don ;}
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 12:56:00 PM
    She Surely Seems A Most Beautiful Woman Enchanting Her Creation. Everything About Her An Emerald Forest Of Pure Splendours. Lost Within, The Crashing Waves Pounding This Heart A Reef And, `She. Beautiful Debbie! Along With Your Magnificent Self, I Shall Favour This Treasure Truly A Dream Within, `A Beautiful Dream. Love, John

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 6/13/2013 4:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I thank you Johnny ;}
  1. Date: 3/1/2013 10:17:00 AM
    wow, wow you should write romance books --you left me wanting more of the story. Have you ever thought of writing a novel? Anyway loved this one. awesome . love phyl

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 3/1/2013 10:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Phyl ;}
  1. Date: 2/26/2013 9:03:00 PM
    wow Debbie, a lovely are an amazing poet and writer.. and at the end you left me hanging..just like in a few novels... always~ LINDA

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 2/27/2013 10:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Linda ;}
  1. Date: 2/26/2013 6:01:00 AM
    Wow...that's an impressive piece...really nice

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 2/26/2013 5:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you ;}
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 10:15:00 PM
    hey, this is really nice I was thinking it was meant for the sensuous contest!! But I think it may have a line limit? If not, you should enter this one!! it is very sensual. soupmail.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 2/26/2013 5:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I haven't entered any contest for long while ;}
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 3:37:00 PM
    Cute story of passion. In addition, it's nice to see the positive image you have of yourself. The different perspectives are always fun. Thanks as always for your presence here.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 2/21/2013 4:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for reading ;}
  1. Date: 2/20/2013 5:07:00 AM
    very good write

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 5:35:00 PM
    Very passionate and romantic..

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 2:51:00 AM
    Debbie, you are amazing. - You should write more such stories, and sell them to magazines. - A lot of work, but you do it so well. - Very, very good!! - Wishing you a beautiful day, the day is yours! - Hugs from Anne-Lise :)