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Burning Candle

Burning candle tells a tale of pure selfless life. ================ Placement: HM; (Nov.2011) Contest:Than-Bauk Sponsor:Rick Parise By:kashinath karmakar

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/26/2011 8:51:00 PM

AHA!! I just saw your peeping eyes!! The Indian actress was much easier to spot! You need an Avatar that is more conspicuous, but at least you got this one up now!! Luv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/26/2011 8:49:00 PM

waiting for that poem, Kash!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2011 6:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in ^Rick's "Than-Bauk" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/17/2011 12:54:00 PM

Good to see the (H M) Kash..!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/17/2011 2:17:00 AM

Congratulations this wonderful win in the contest of Rick, kash

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/16/2011 2:20:00 PM

Congratulations, Kash. THe message of yours is excellent.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/16/2011 1:50:00 PM

I see your candle burning off the impurities of life...a wise and noble write. Congrats Kash.....ps...I thot of you as I was eating breakfast today...ha ha. Kashi Cereal...loaded with cranberries and NUTS!!!! ha ha. Gwendolen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/16/2011 1:41:00 PM

You have such a spiritual heart, Kash. This is beautiful! Congratulations on your success in Rick's contest! Hope you have a happy Thanksgiving. Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne

Date: 11/13/2011 1:09:00 PM

Yes, seeing all those candles can be so moving. Lovely piece, Kash

Dinda Minardi

Date: 11/13/2011 10:07:00 AM

A very creative and beautiful analogue poem... The chimney smoke underlines your thought, God! only you would come up with that words... Dinda :)

Dinda Minardi
Date: 11/13/2011 10:08:00 AM

God!!! This is supposed to be sent on Michael's page... Sorry!!! Terribly sorry... God! I embarrass myself...

Dinda Minardi

Date: 11/13/2011 10:04:00 AM

This is wonderful, really!!! Like this a lot and the message... Wow, Kash :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/12/2011 9:05:00 PM

WOW,,P.D.

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 11/12/2011 5:15:00 PM

selfless is on my top word list. Once, I told a friend that he was selfless...he got offended---So I let it ride!:) figured if he thought it meant selfish, he did not deserve an explanation! Hell awaits pranksters like me. Nicer Bauk than most:)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/12/2011 1:36:00 PM

Like your Than-Bauk. It is one form I have not tried. Yes, burning the candles at both ends--makes me think of a workaholic. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2011 12:26:00 PM

Kash, this is pretty. I forgot the exact way to do these. I think the last syllable of line one rhymes with first syllable line two? (or maybe third) But I can't remember about line 3. What did you rhyme in line 3?