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Buoyant Power, Seas of Weak

The small pebble sinks, The Huge steel ship floats and sails, lost and found in waves. Charma

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/12/2010 9:07:00 AM
The wow of ballast allows the ships to float, as the pebbles disappear, technology gloats. But history has told, in many a play > ships can sink > and by the pebbles they now lay. Super Senyru Charmaine >> James
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Date: 3/11/2010 7:54:00 PM
WOW, Charma!! Awesome observation of the irony -- the pebble sinks while the heavy ship floats. Says a lot about life, too! Going to my favorites, dear friend! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/11/2010 7:31:00 PM
What a great analogy Charma.. interesting scenario.. lut that title once again.. enjoyed a different Senryu..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/11/2010 5:25:00 PM
Great descriptive write..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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