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Bubble-Icious

There once was a gray shark called "Trouble" He ordered his armchair X- double A mermaid swam by She smiled and said "Hi!" He replied with a fragrant bubble...

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Skat A

Date: 4/7/2010 8:25:00 AM

Enjoyed ! thank you

Sue Mason

Date: 3/11/2010 6:38:00 PM

LOL wonderful here, Iolanda!!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/7/2010 6:21:00 PM

funny, again

Susan Palli

Date: 3/3/2010 12:08:00 PM

so funny! great imagery

Jared Pickett

Date: 3/3/2010 8:50:00 AM

I can see why this has made the hot poems list....Good work my friend....:JP]

Margaret Foster

Date: 3/2/2010 7:57:00 PM

Congratulations Iolanda on your place with this smiling rhyme, good job......Cheers Margaret

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/2/2010 7:24:00 PM

Great blog Iolanda... enjoyed .. and hope u have much success with your new book.. its a glorious day for u to enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/2/2010 10:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest Iolanda. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/2/2010 6:55:00 AM

Thankxxx Iolanda for your special comment on my blog for my son.. I am so appreciative of all the poets who responded.. he left last night so .. all we can do now is pray ..thankxxx dear friend..luv..Linda-Marie..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2010 10:47:00 PM

hmmm, I must have been seeing CArolyn's name somewhere right before I came here, Iolanda. Again, so sorry. GREAT WIN!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2010 10:31:00 PM

ok, HERE it is . THis was one of my very favorites that I read and I was trying to remember who had done this one. It was YOU!! congratulations, CArolyn! LUv, Andrea

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/1/2010 10:51:00 AM

This one is a cutie. Congratulations. Thank you for your comments. Love, Joyce

Brian Strand

Date: 3/1/2010 8:11:00 AM

Excellent Iolanda,congrats.Rgds Brian & thanks for your always welcome comments.

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 3/1/2010 6:11:00 AM

This is so original, congratulations, I really like it. Déirdre

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/1/2010 5:56:00 AM

congrats on the win!!

Sean Kelly

Date: 3/1/2010 4:27:00 AM

Another mermaid winner and well deserved , Iolanda . PS , which end did the bubble come from ???? ...

James Fraser

Date: 3/1/2010 3:33:00 AM

Kool Limerick Iolanda, i am delighted for you being placed in Carolyn's fine contest >> James

Tim Ryerson

Date: 3/1/2010 1:53:00 AM

Hilarious, Iolanda! Congratulations! You are a very funny lady for 'shore' - Tim

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/1/2010 12:00:00 AM

It’s a fish eat fish world out there! Congratulations Iolanda, you swam to the top of the pond with your very funny win in Carolyn Devonshire’s Sea Tale Limerick. (Imagine bubbles floating around the following words!) Bask in the fun of the winner’s circle. You deserve it. Big Smiles! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 2/28/2010 9:46:00 PM

This ws a FUN contest. A lot of witty entries and you was one. I had a BIG smile from this one! Good job! Regards, Gerard.

Charles Henderson

Date: 2/28/2010 7:29:00 PM

Very good Iolanda. Congrats on your placement in the contest. LOL Charles Henderson

John Freeman

Date: 2/28/2010 7:10:00 PM

Awesome win Iolanda, congratulations, Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/28/2010 6:25:00 PM

Congrats Iolanda on your third place win in the Limerick contest with this wonderful witty Limerick .. a wonderful win for a wonderful poetess.. and thats a lotta wonderful..enjoy.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/28/2010 6:11:00 PM

Those sharks and their bubbles..good for you with your sin in the contest. BG

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/28/2010 5:55:00 PM

Oh yes....I remember this one, it really made me laugh! Congratulations on a fun winning poem!! ~ Love, Carrie