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Brutal Salvation

Sip that blood .. fill thy melancholic heart bandage my deep wounds then dig me a grave may my life begin if I shall depart for the mortuary life had me enslaved and my conscious mind cursed his sanity scattered am I among those frosty dreams to proceed my road to eternity and satirize the life I won't redeem so tolerate my sin .. accept my wrath for in this perfect world am incomplete survived by death .. anxious for my last breath drift in grief as I flip my final sheet thus I rot shrouded by desperation till I'm blessed with thy brutal salvation

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/4/2012 12:46:00 PM

Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Samar. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/12/2011 8:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Samar. A well deserved feature. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/17/2011 4:19:00 PM

wow! thanks for asking for the assignment... after seeing you have not much poetry here.,... i will glady read both... than give you assingment... great deep and dark poem,,,, take care,..p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/16/2011 1:29:00 PM

Creative and brilliant expressions with nice title with oxymoron, samar

Samar Saleh
Date: 6/16/2011 4:20:00 PM

thanks a lot, glad you liked it :)

Bob Quigley

Date: 6/16/2011 8:55:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup. A great first offering. I look forward to more. BobQ

Samar Saleh
Date: 6/16/2011 4:22:00 PM

thank you Bob, i'm happy to be here and looking forward to share more poems and thoughts :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/16/2011 6:00:00 AM

the name on this one caught my eye so i had to stop and read it. this is a very good dark poem i hope it is not to real for you. too many people have a hard life and you write to good to know that kind of salvation. enjoyed reading your poem p.d.

Samar Saleh
Date: 6/16/2011 4:25:00 PM

thanks, the poem expresses my thoughts but in a certain mood, i'm glad you liked it :)

Samar Saleh
Date: 6/16/2011 4:25:00 PM

thanks, the poem expresses my thoughts but in a certain mood, i'm glad you liked it :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/16/2011 5:40:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Samar. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Samar Saleh
Date: 6/16/2011 4:28:00 PM

thanks a lot Carol, i already loved the site, and i'm looking forward to read for all the poets here and share my thoughts with you here, thanks for the wishes :)