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Bronze, Silver and Gold

Bronze, silver and gold Caught in the sun so light The momentous reveal of every fight Wishes we are never told Caught in the sun so light Bronze faces contrite Wishes we are never told Faces much too bold Bronze faces contrite Compared to crinkled green notes Wishes we are never told Survival’s fight Compared to crinkled green notes The momentous reveal of every fight Survival’s fight Bronze, silver and gold

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Skat A

Date: 1/30/2016 12:06:00 PM

PHOEBE, A great pleasure to find and read your pen today. Love -- SKAT --

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/28/2012 8:22:00 AM

Lovely work, and welcome to the site xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/26/2012 5:36:00 AM

A belated congratulations on your win in Rhonda and Cyndi's "Penny Pantoums" contest Phoebe. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/25/2012 4:58:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 9/25/2012 12:23:00 PM

Very nice Phoebe!Congrats on your win in the contest.

Rena Kiya

Date: 9/25/2012 11:35:00 AM

this is my 3rd time reading this peace of writing i like it alot am waiting for more please read the rest of my writing it will help you with descrptiveness and imagry manga and anime forever go furries

Ankush Chakrabarty

Date: 9/20/2012 4:33:00 PM

Amazing style! Loved it :)

Phoebe Morakinyo
Date: 9/21/2012 11:52:00 AM

I'm grateful ;) Thank you :)

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 9/20/2012 1:37:00 AM

Lovely write Phoebe! Very well developed!

Phoebe Morakinyo
Date: 9/21/2012 11:52:00 AM

Thank you :) I'm glad :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/19/2012 11:03:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Phoebe. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

Phoebe Morakinyo
Date: 9/19/2012 11:05:00 AM

Aww, thank you :) I can't believe everyone here is so nice :)

Rena Kiya

Date: 9/19/2012 10:53:00 AM

wow this is really good i love your avatar bythe way manga and animae rule and are very addictive i love them you should read my writing i have one called furries all otherwritings iv'e done so far are kind of dark i will be wacthing you postings

Phoebe Morakinyo
Date: 9/19/2012 11:03:00 AM

Thanks :) And thanks again :) I cropped it from a pic I found on the internet. They do! And yes they are addictive, wehen you start you just can't stop... Ooh, I'll check it out, and thanks for watching :) I'm hoping I win the contest because I'm trying to publish a book and I need references (plus I like the idea of poem competitions)

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 9/17/2012 10:02:00 AM

Well done, To me this would be a difficult poetic form. But, you pulled it off so well. I especially enjoyed the line "Wishes we are never told" The wishes others make

Phoebe Morakinyo
Date: 9/18/2012 11:14:00 AM

Thank you, it was really difficult, but I don't really deserve all the credit since I was following a pantuom layout from the internet (I didn't know a pantuom existed till a few days ago) it's nice to know I did ok :)

Terry O'Leary

Date: 9/16/2012 12:47:00 PM

Very nicely constructed! Terry

Phoebe Morakinyo
Date: 9/16/2012 1:15:00 PM

Thank you :)