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Broken Tears

The whisper of the fractured wind Intensify painful sighs That echo in the falling rain, to inter broken tears beneath the fallen leaves, disguised as winsome smiles which turn to ghastly frowns in winter's wrath, in snowflakes epitaph

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/30/2015 12:23:00 AM
Wonderful expressions n heartfelt write Joseph, congrats on ur win1
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Date: 7/29/2015 12:26:00 AM
Powerful metaphors for brokenness, Joseph. Congratulations on your great win! Kim
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Date: 7/28/2015 9:01:00 PM
Joseph, Congratulations. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/28/2015 4:34:00 PM
wonderful imagery which I found quite chilling Joseph - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 7/28/2015 1:16:00 PM
Joseph, Congratulations! Thank you for supporting one of the MANY contest I held This Year. I enjoyed reading every entry in this very old contest OF MINE:):):). Stop by my latest blog "EXCUSE ME" if you'd like or have the time. --I'm glad to be back on the wild side of Poetry Soup hosting, new contest. Yours Truly!!! *LINDA*
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Date: 12/8/2013 7:09:00 PM
Joseph,, , Congratulations on 'Your own favorite poem contest." I truly miss reading and scanning poems from the winning contest list. Hope you are well! Always & Forever * Linda
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Joseph May
Date: 12/8/2013 9:54:00 PM
thank you Linda....hugs
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Joseph May
Date: 12/8/2013 9:54:00 PM
Date: 12/3/2013 6:29:00 PM
congrats on your fine win.
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Date: 12/2/2013 11:05:00 AM
a very good metaphors, enjoyed it. congrats on the win
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Date: 12/2/2013 8:23:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Joseph
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Date: 12/2/2013 6:04:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A favorite poem of yours! -by Giorgio V. - A clear favorite poem! - Well done, Joseph !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/19/2013 3:50:00 PM
Joseph, I finally have come here to see what you must have entered entered in my contest. It is a fine poem. But Do you realize it was never entered into my contest ? maybe you forgot? I just wanted to let you know that in case you were curious or had forgotten to enter it. It's got some lovely symbolism!
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Date: 11/15/2013 6:00:00 AM
Joseph !! This is awesome-- I love your use of metaphors-- emotion vs. nature. X
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Date: 11/10/2013 5:26:00 PM
i adore this poem, your images are so beautifully penned...wow....great write Joseph, i think Andrea will love this one :)
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Joseph May
Date: 11/10/2013 6:39:00 PM
thank you Sandra
Date: 11/10/2013 3:26:00 PM
Ahh!! Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for your visit..Sara
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Joseph May
Date: 11/10/2013 4:33:00 PM
thank you Sara
Date: 11/10/2013 1:32:00 PM
- Beautiful ... still a little sad ... well written Joseph! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph May
Date: 11/10/2013 4:33:00 PM
thank you Anne
Date: 11/10/2013 12:20:00 PM
Nice imagery... Terry
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Joseph May
Date: 11/10/2013 1:30:00 PM
thank you Terry....

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