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Broken

~Suicidal Night~

I sit alone in the dark.
In the dark I sit alone.
Nobody sees me.
I see nobody.

~***~

Flowers, above.
My eyes have darkened to a color never seen before.
Forever closed!
 
It Rains!
It Rains!

In this room, I've drowned too many times.
I remember cascades of water under my eyes.
My satin sheets wrinkle and cold.
I die and died every night.
No one sees the pain that kills me everyday.
The wounds that reach 6 feet deep.

Lucid demons
Bleeding wrist
Scary dreams
Screaming
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Incomplete'
Torn'
Broken-
Is how I live

I'm alone-
No one's around.
My body's like a coffin
Stiff in my own home.

~A Poet Destroyer Collaboration~

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  1. Date: 7/26/2015 3:50:00 AM
    A deeply emotive write that takes the reader to where the poet is coming from. This is why you stand apart, SKAT. You do not make the reader feel guilty, and so we would like to join you and understand. hugs!

  1. Date: 7/23/2015 8:07:00 PM
    A beautifully haunting poem. If this poem is more then just a poem I hope writing it helps you cope.

  1. Date: 7/23/2015 12:24:00 AM
    You nailed it my friend. Having been very badly broken over a dozen times myself I have some deep knowledge of the subject. Dar is a subject I know well, although I now live in the light. For me this is an epic write and adding it to my fav list. Thanks much....

  1. Date: 7/13/2015 11:42:00 AM
    You are an amazing poet although U don't realize that u r teaching me. I understand the darkness u speak of but as ur eyes search above u see the light.

  1. Date: 7/5/2015 7:36:00 AM
    I'm not sure which is better, the poem or he comments it illicited. This one obviously struck a chord with your readers. Thanks so much for picking my blackbird poem, it has a lot of personal meaning for me so I appreciate it being chosen.

  1. Date: 7/4/2015 10:46:00 AM
    pain . . . indeed pain! The anguish and the torment of this piece is BEAUTIFULLY and WONDERFULLY ELOQUENT!!! Amazing

  1. Date: 6/17/2015 6:22:00 AM
    heart breaking indeed. GOOD POET

  1. Date: 6/12/2015 1:27:00 PM
    Your feelings leap out of your words and ignite the emotional fires smoldering within your verses. Emile.

  1. Date: 6/12/2015 1:16:00 PM
    I like this a lot. if only more people worked together! I really felt this poem and it scared me. The sanctuary of house and home is gone.

  1. Date: 6/11/2015 4:25:00 PM
    As one who has suffered from severe depression, I could totally relate to this work. Your reflections of a dark place bring it to light for those who haven't shared your space. Thank you.

  1. Date: 6/3/2015 12:44:00 PM
    Just WOW....I could really connect with this one...

  1. Date: 5/28/2015 2:34:00 PM
    This poem reminds me of a time when I was a teenager. I felt the same and sometimes still do.

  1. Date: 5/23/2015 6:40:00 AM
    Thank you for your lovely comment on my poem The White Knight. Your poems are great thank you. Judith

  1. Date: 5/23/2015 2:19:00 AM
    wow a very powerful poem loved it

  1. Date: 5/22/2015 9:00:00 AM
    Being a member in poetry soup you are not alone. This is very clever writing. I loved reading this and I'm sure others can relate. Keep strong!

  1. Date: 5/15/2015 2:09:00 PM
    Thanks for dropping by..I enjoyed reading this one..Sara

  1. Date: 4/26/2015 10:24:00 PM
    The darkness consumes me..this is my kind of poetry...it's fantastic..I am glad this is one of the first poems of yours i decided to read..I will be back for more

  1. Date: 4/21/2015 5:07:00 AM
    am loving this poem great work girl

  1. Date: 4/18/2015 8:36:00 AM
    Fantasic poem, very tragic. It really captures the depth of suicidal thoughts. Great job!

  1. Date: 4/17/2015 8:45:00 PM
    whao, great and amazing poem.

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