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Broken

~Suicidal Night~

I sit alone in the dark.
In the dark I sit alone.
Nobody sees me.
I see nobody.

~***~

Flowers, above.
My eyes have darkened to a color never seen before.
Forever closed!
 
It Rains!
It Rains!

In this room, I've drowned too many times.
I remember cascades of water under my eyes.
My satin sheets wrinkle and cold.
I die and died every night.
No one sees the pain that kills me every day.
The wounds that reach 6 feet deep.

Lucid demons
Bleeding wrist
Scary dreams
Screaming
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Incomplete'
Torn'
Broken-
Is how I live

I'm alone-
No one's around.
My body's like a coffin
Stiff in my own home.

~A Poet Destroyer Collaboration~

Copyright © SKAT A

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  1. Date: 8/30/2015 6:40:00 PM
    Is this reaching out for help? or just a really cool dark poem?

  1. Date: 8/24/2015 3:24:00 AM
    Hello, Skat A. I cannot offer much in praise, except to say I read this on a personal level. It is as good as all say, and more. I would have preferred to offer praise privately, so I could more effectively thank you in turn for the kind words you offered me. Doing things like this where others may overhear is quite embarrassing.

  1. Date: 8/19/2015 12:00:00 PM
    Poignant but atleast the creativity and unique awesome poetic style did earn it a well deserved top win wow! Congrats skats! And warmest tnx 4 letin me kn of my wn.

  1. Date: 8/19/2015 1:47:00 AM
    Hello, Skat A. This is sad but very powerful poem. I like the imagery. It brought bitter spark in my heart and keeps me moving to look for more. Kind regards, Edgar

  1. Date: 8/12/2015 3:29:00 AM
    I really like this. It feels lonely. a loniness I have felt myself. The pictures it puts in my mind is quite special to me.

  1. Date: 8/10/2015 8:00:00 PM
    Talk about setting the mood.. This amazing write rocks! Congrats on your win, SKAT!

  1. Date: 8/6/2015 9:02:00 AM
    Very good imagery. Life behind the smile. When life attacks us and we feel misunderstood. Our world becomes this room and we need to break out. Your words bring out the emotion you feel.

  1. Date: 8/5/2015 3:38:00 PM
    Such lovely language: "Nobody sees me./I see nobody." I have been depressed/suicidal and this resonates deeply with me. I also admire, "In this room, I've drowned too many times" and "I die and died every night." The last, the breakage and upsetting of time, is so accurate. I love the disassociation with reality--it's EXACTLY what I've felt. And thank you for your kind message on my poem yesterday. Is there a way to message here? If not, email me and we'll chat: ladyristretto@mail.com.

  1. Date: 8/4/2015 5:55:00 AM
    Congratulations Skat and Linda on an expressive, impressive write and on a fitting win. All the best. // paul

  1. Date: 8/3/2015 1:07:00 AM
    Congrats SKAT

  1. Date: 8/2/2015 11:14:00 PM
    Superb write Skat that's worthy of great win! Big congrats!

  1. Date: 8/2/2015 7:21:00 PM
    I remember this. Just recently commented on this in fact. Glad to see this won, SKAT! Congrats! hugs

  1. Date: 8/2/2015 7:13:00 PM
    Congrats Skat a great collab

  1. Date: 8/2/2015 6:13:00 PM
    Skat, l just stopped by to say congrats on your "mood" contest win:-)

  1. Date: 8/2/2015 4:17:00 PM
    Thank you so much... Silent One.... :) SKAT

  1. Date: 8/2/2015 8:17:00 AM
    such a deep dark write Skat - congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

  1. Date: 8/2/2015 6:54:00 AM
    Congrats on your win Skat ...

  1. Date: 8/2/2015 5:51:00 AM
    Leeann , it is a priveledge to share bed no 3 , with you , ...(whispers in her ear ...i think your`s was the best shhhhh!!) dont tell Linda i said that :)

  1. Date: 8/2/2015 4:33:00 AM
    Oh SKAT, what a deep and dark place your poem describes, it paints a picture of pure saddness.... I judge my contest blindly and didnt know this was written by you.... Congratulations on your win, thank you for taking part...

  1. Date: 7/26/2015 3:50:00 AM
    A deeply emotive write that takes the reader to where the poet is coming from. This is why you stand apart, SKAT. You do not make the reader feel guilty, and so we would like to join you and understand. hugs!

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