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Broken

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Broken

~Suicidal Night~

I sit alone in the dark.
In the dark I sit alone.
Nobody sees me.
I see nobody.

~***~

Flowers, above.
My eyes have darkened to a color never seen before.
Forever closed!
 
It Rains!
It Rains!

In this room, I've drowned too many times.
I remember cascades of water under my eyes.
My satin sheets wrinkle and cold.
I die and died every night.
No one sees the pain that kills me everyday.
The wounds that reach 6 feet deep.

Lucid demons
Bleeding wrist
Scary dreams
Screaming
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Incomplete'
Torn'
Broken-
Is how I live

I'm alone-
No one's around.
My body's like a coffin
Stiff in my own home.

~A Poet Destroyer Collaboration~

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  1. Date: 12/14/2014 12:06:00 PM
    Came back to psoup after so many days ... loved these lines specially No one sees the pain that kills me everyday. The wounds that reach 6 feet deep.

  1. Date: 11/30/2014 9:05:00 AM
    It gave me chills throughout the verses, you couldn't make it any better than that! I loved it.

  1. Date: 11/30/2014 7:48:00 AM
    Wow that's some deep poetry.Love it.

  1. Date: 11/6/2014 2:42:00 PM
    Love your work!

  1. Date: 10/8/2014 6:09:00 PM
    Skat, this poem is a true beauty. Very touchy, but well written. You're friend katie c: X.x

  1. Date: 9/12/2014 10:44:00 PM
    I really connected with this while reading every word through every sentence to every line. Very enjoyable

  1. Date: 8/27/2014 11:09:00 PM
    SKAT Very strong emotions and feelings in each line that touches the readers heart. Your soul and sadness flow onto the page with complete force and strength

  1. Date: 8/27/2014 9:12:00 PM
    Now this is my type of writing. So in tone with emotions that you feel it pour out. Nice job

  1. Date: 8/27/2014 9:11:00 PM
    Now this is my type of writing. So in tone with emotions that you feel it pour out. Nice job

  1. Date: 7/8/2014 11:56:00 PM
    superb mind blowing deep 6 feet hmm nice work...best of luck

  1. Date: 6/22/2014 3:39:00 AM
    Excellent. Beautifully said. Enjoyed . Tfs

  1. Date: 6/20/2014 5:50:00 PM
    Wow very dark and sad. I've felt like this before lol very good write.

  1. Date: 6/9/2014 11:02:00 PM
    Great Poem! A true release of feelings. Continue writing like this and you will never be alone! Best Wishes!

  1. Date: 4/22/2014 4:31:00 AM
    Where have you been? This poem is awesome--and depressingly familiar, and now that it's familiar, I'm depressed. See how it works? It's sad that no one is reading your poems, but it will get better lol Peace and hugs, Mel :)

  1. Date: 4/22/2014 4:31:00 AM
    Where have you been? This poem is awesome--and depressingly familiar, and now that it's familiar, I'm depressed. See how it works? It's sad that no one is reading your poems, but it will get better lol Peace and hugs, Mel :)

  1. Date: 4/12/2014 1:31:00 AM
    Waas up girl. Just dropped by to say hello, and to compliment you on a well-crafted, descriptive and real, poem. Loneliness. Seems to be a common theme among us twisted and tormented souls known as poets. Hey, look at Poe! Check out my latest when you get a chance. The theme? Loneliness. hugs mel :)

  1. Date: 4/5/2014 5:09:00 PM
    hearing the cold loneliness is felt through my soul, so break the locks run into the wonders of the world..... smile and hugs..... Gina

  1. Date: 4/5/2014 10:09:00 AM
    Wow, this poem is really amazing...

  1. Date: 3/28/2014 9:42:00 PM
    This really touched me, the darkest moment is followed by the brightest light

  1. Date: 3/22/2014 1:17:00 AM
    Hey SKAT, it's so deep and gripping..god bless :)

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