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Broken

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Broken

~Suicidal Night~

I sit alone in the dark.
In the dark I sit alone.
Nobody sees me.
I see nobody.

~***~

Flowers, above.
My eyes have darkened to a color never seen before.
Forever closed!
 
It Rains!
It Rains!

In this room, I've drowned too many times.
I remember cascades of water under my eyes.
My satin sheets wrinkle and cold.
I die and died every night.
No one sees the pain that kills me everyday.
The wounds that reach 6 feet deep.

Lucid demons
Bleeding wrist
Scary dreams
Screaming
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Incomplete'
Torn'
Broken-
Is how I live

I'm alone-
No one's around.
My body's like a coffin
Stiff in my own home.

~A Poet Destroyer Collaboration~

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  1. Date: 2/28/2015 11:04:00 PM
    Amazing poem, I find I can connect to this poem with melancholy. A dark yet relative and moving poem from a talented writer, I wish you all the best and look forward to reading more of your writing.

  1. Date: 2/28/2015 7:15:00 PM
    Wow!! This couldnt be more of how I'm feeling inside thank you for sharing!!

  1. Date: 2/17/2015 6:00:00 PM
    Skat You wrote to me and told me that you would like to be newest poetry soup friend, I would like to be your friend as well. write me on my email I have already sent you an email, If you wish write me and let me know how your heart is mending.

  1. Date: 2/13/2015 12:00:00 PM
    Oh... Extremely vivid... I can feel the pain in your words... Amazing poem. :)

  1. Date: 1/28/2015 8:42:00 AM
    Wow nice lines ^_^ It really gave me the imagery of someone who's broken...

  1. Date: 1/25/2015 11:08:00 AM
    Hi SKAT, Thanks for welcoming me so warmly. This poem is heartfelt, sad and so, sooo beautiful. Thank you!!

  1. Date: 1/20/2015 4:51:00 PM
    wow i remember growing and feeling exactly like these words wow that feeling pushed to write i get you i really get you nuff love #jamaicanstlye

  1. Date: 12/14/2014 12:06:00 PM
    Came back to psoup after so many days ... loved these lines specially No one sees the pain that kills me everyday. The wounds that reach 6 feet deep.

  1. Date: 11/30/2014 9:05:00 AM
    It gave me chills throughout the verses, you couldn't make it any better than that! I loved it.

  1. Date: 11/30/2014 7:48:00 AM
    Wow that's some deep poetry.Love it.

  1. Date: 11/6/2014 2:42:00 PM
    Love your work!

  1. Date: 10/8/2014 6:09:00 PM
    Skat, this poem is a true beauty. Very touchy, but well written. You're friend katie c: X.x

  1. Date: 9/12/2014 10:44:00 PM
    I really connected with this while reading every word through every sentence to every line. Very enjoyable

  1. Date: 8/27/2014 11:09:00 PM
    SKAT Very strong emotions and feelings in each line that touches the readers heart. Your soul and sadness flow onto the page with complete force and strength

  1. Date: 8/27/2014 9:12:00 PM
    Now this is my type of writing. So in tone with emotions that you feel it pour out. Nice job

  1. Date: 8/27/2014 9:11:00 PM
    Now this is my type of writing. So in tone with emotions that you feel it pour out. Nice job

  1. Date: 7/8/2014 11:56:00 PM
    superb mind blowing deep 6 feet hmm nice work...best of luck

  1. Date: 6/22/2014 3:39:00 AM
    Excellent. Beautifully said. Enjoyed . Tfs

  1. Date: 6/20/2014 5:50:00 PM
    Wow very dark and sad. I've felt like this before lol very good write.

  1. Date: 6/9/2014 11:02:00 PM
    Great Poem! A true release of feelings. Continue writing like this and you will never be alone! Best Wishes!

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