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Bright, Clear Picture

A city park after a storm The leaves on the trees are drooping small puddles in the muddy field birds flying overhead Empty now, the park almost seems like a living organism Drip, drip,drip as the water slides down a statue The benches are wet but I decide to sit on one Breathing in air that has been cleansed by the downpour If I only felt this way all the time! a squirrel rushes up an oak tree life goes on as it always has Sometimes we need a heavy rain to clear the air to feed the grass to make us feel whole again The squirrel comes down again curious and hoping for food

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Date: 2/14/2010 6:52:00 PM
Another awesome poem! You are truly special, Matt! It takes a special person to "see" all of this. Beautiful! Another fav.! Totally enjoyed this, too! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 2/13/2010 5:47:00 PM
Nature cleansed and mind refreshed left open for thoughts to flow and the pen to go swiftly across the page with the Spirit in control. Keep writing. Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara
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Date: 2/11/2010 11:51:00 AM
A very lovely slice of life picture, Matthew. I really enjoyed reading this. LUv, andrea
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Date: 2/9/2010 7:34:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your awesom poetry with us today Matthew. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2010 5:54:00 PM
i like this. wonderful write. i love that theory. did you come up with this while sitting in a park?
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