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Once within these very walls farmers woke at dawn. The field was full of vegetable, the cows were in the barn. Life was full of chicken clucks, and Mother's who could darn, bales of hay stacked within but, all of that's withdrawn. Within my walls, my embrace, I hold one matron chaste a Smokey cat, and bric-a-brac, she's a lonely one. Surrounded left, surrounded right, all her chores are done, I can but hold, I can not mold, the ones that I embrace. Four walls within, four walls without, a box of reverie meant to hold the dreams of tykes, of pets and chick-a-dees. Head held high, I seal the deal by denizens decree and in the night, the shadows talk to comfort such as she. A house, a home, a room, a box what stories people tell but walls will not for you see, these walls are ancestral.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/21/2012 4:51:00 AM
I so enjoyed your poem Deb. I expecially identify with your first stanza. Family should write down things that happen to pass on to future generations. I was given a letter my great grandmother wrote and it meant so much to me to see what she wrote to my grandmother whom I never got to meet. You wrote a wonderful, moving poem Deb. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/20/2012 3:07:00 PM
If for the contest, reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 9/20/2012 12:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2012 5:48:00 AM
Lovely poem, oh and when your family is gone its so hard. really like this poem. It just touches me. thank you for sharing it. Lee
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Date: 9/19/2012 11:21:00 AM
Wonderful write and win! Congrats! Hugs
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Date: 9/18/2012 10:02:00 AM
I would have placed this on in the # 1 list. I like the line, "I can but hold, I cannot mold the ones that I embrace. Very impressive. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/18/2012 8:21:00 AM
CONGRATS DEBBIE ON AN EXTRAORDINARY WRITE AND OUTSTANDING WIN LUV .. ALWAYS ENJOY YOUR THOUGHTS OF EXPRESSION .. BTW .. HAPPY BIRTHDAY HUGS AND SMOOCHIES FROM MY ENTIRE FAMILY .. ENJOY .. AM GOING TO SEE HAND SPECIALIST TOMORROW FOR ANALYSIS AND PROCEDURES TO CORRECT AND ALLEVIATE SWELLING AND PAIN .. RON IS TYPING FOR ME AGAIN ..OH ..
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Date: 9/18/2012 5:48:00 AM
Ah, your contest was judged yesterday. Maybe you were just giving your all there, yes? Hugs!
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Date: 9/18/2012 5:46:00 AM
Debbie, you okay? Nearly a week of no poetry is so no like you! Sick? Heavy work load? Bad news? Please soupie me, k? Dee worried about you :)
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Date: 9/17/2012 9:21:00 PM
I loved it before and I love it now. congrats, Debs. And I am SO glad you liked my Pine poem. Thanks for the inspiration.
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Date: 9/17/2012 7:37:00 PM
My hearty congratulations on your win, my dear Debbie! hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 9/17/2012 7:03:00 PM
Congrats Debbie...your poem reminds me of way back when, when mom used to be sitting darning dad's work pants , the chickens out in the yard creating as ruckus. One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 9/17/2012 4:27:00 PM
Congratulations on having your entry chosen as a winner in the contest.
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Date: 9/17/2012 2:12:00 PM
A lamenting sadness fills my heart. When endings are what's left of what we start. The grave yards know only too well. What's in these walls is what we sell. Soup mail.
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Date: 9/17/2012 12:50:00 PM
steeped in generational impressions, debbie... warm congrats!.) huggs
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Date: 9/17/2012 11:45:00 AM
Congrats Debi on your win in the contest!Loved it!
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Date: 9/17/2012 11:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your #4 win in my contest! Great imagery throughout :)
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Date: 9/17/2012 10:36:00 AM
Congratulations Debbie on your terrific write and win, well done xx
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Date: 9/17/2012 10:28:00 AM
DEBBIE, congratulations with your wonderful win in Susan's "If These Walls Could Talk..." contest.. have a nice day~ PD
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Date: 9/15/2012 3:44:00 PM
You create such a peaceful nostalgic scene with your descriptive words Debbie! Absolutely delightful! Love and hugs, Jack
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Date: 9/14/2012 2:27:00 AM
Very nice!Enjoyed.Can we call it a sonnet?
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Date: 9/14/2012 6:09:00 AM
yes Kash it's a SONNET using personification as the main poetic vehicle..Susan asked for rhyming poems using personification. Personification can be used in ANY poetic form
Date: 9/13/2012 10:15:00 PM
This seems to be for the walls challenge of Susan's, right? A very interesting approach and I much enjoyed the nostalgia of it, Debs. So are you saying the fireflies are starting to disappear from your area?? Say it ain't so!!
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Date: 9/13/2012 3:21:00 PM
Yep! Those walls make a box. Sometimes I feel it too, can't stand high enough to look out the window. Love, daver
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Date: 9/13/2012 5:22:00 AM
I find this very profound also Debbie, i also see walls of a different kind surrounding you, that's how i relate to your last stanza.......
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Date: 9/12/2012 6:36:00 AM
Very Clever, like it xx
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