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Brevity-The Mexican Cock

The Mexican Cock stands tall when the hens are around, Glancing, strutting and pecking his corn off the hot ground. Cock a doodle doo, says he Do you want to marry me? Off he goes into the chicken coup While the chicks tiptoe around his poop He puffs his chest out and basks in the shade Waiting on the pick of the day to lay Her eggs to keep the ranch worthwhile Because there is only one gallo

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Skat A

Date: 7/25/2015 11:07:00 PM

GIANA:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Giana Gallardo Hesterberg
Date: 7/28/2015 10:42:00 PM

Thank you so much, SKAT!

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/15/2015 10:14:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Giana. Viv

Giana Gallardo Hesterberg
Date: 7/15/2015 10:17:00 PM

Thank you very much, Viv!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/15/2015 1:39:00 AM

Giana, Congrats on your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Giana Gallardo Hesterberg
Date: 7/15/2015 10:18:00 PM

Thanks, Linda!

Skat A

Date: 7/14/2015 12:04:00 AM

Giana, Congratulations on your sweet win. Love SKAT

Giana Gallardo Hesterberg
Date: 7/14/2015 8:41:00 PM

Thanks, SKAT!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/13/2015 12:22:00 PM

Yep, you captured the cock alright. We used to raise chickens and I have been flogged by the meanest rooster. Big congrats on your first place win. I enjoyed

Giana Gallardo Hesterberg
Date: 7/13/2015 8:40:00 PM

Thank you so much for your encouragement, Connie! I really wanted to capture the spirit of the cock. ;)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/13/2015 12:02:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Giana Gallardo Hesterberg
Date: 7/13/2015 8:40:00 PM

Thanks again, Jan!

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/13/2015 8:39:00 AM

Great entry! Thanks for writing for my contest prompt and congrats on a first place win ;)

Giana Gallardo Hesterberg
Date: 7/13/2015 8:41:00 PM

Wow! It's a pleasure to meet you, Casarah, and I am humbled and honored to have won. I have only been in this community for a few days, so I am still trying to find my way around. Thank you so much for the confidence boost! :D

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/11/2015 4:17:00 PM

- With smiles and joy I welcome you to P-Soup, Giana :) - Hope you will find this poem page interesting and post many more poems in the future - Have a great experience together here with us in "the poems world" - I wish you every success - // Anne-Lise :)

Giana Gallardo Hesterberg
Date: 7/12/2015 10:36:00 PM

Thank you so much for your encouragement, Anne-Lise! I look forward to reading your poetry and posting more of mine!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/11/2015 3:53:00 AM

This made me smile - great humour:-) hugs Jan xx

Giana Gallardo Hesterberg
Date: 7/12/2015 10:36:00 PM

Glad it made you smile, Jan. :) Thank you!

Skat A

Date: 7/11/2015 2:23:00 AM

Hi Giana, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Giana Gallardo Hesterberg
Date: 7/12/2015 10:37:00 PM

Thank you, Skat!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2015 12:45:00 AM

I got a smile out of this one, Giana, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Giana Gallardo Hesterberg
Date: 7/12/2015 10:38:00 PM

Glad it made you smile, Linda! I look forward to reading some of your poetry and giving you feedback, too. Thank you!