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--------------------------------------------- Just breathe... Breathe..! Gasping, into light you're thrown! Like glass, your turning leaf is blown clear of sweet slumber's song but there's no need of hers - you'll sing your own. You, newly born of mother's prayers, will breathe your first of earthen airs and thirsty, let your voice be heard 'til she's dispersed the drink she shares. As leaves are, by the wind, bestirred, with each new breath, you'll find you're spurred on by survivals undertow, as well as by debts love-incurred. Oh, precious child, I love you so! What wonders of this world you'll know but one day too, this life you'll leave... Take one last breath and let it go. Yes, breathe... --------------------------------------------- Contest Judged 1/25/2016

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Date: 2/3/2016 12:36:00 PM
This is so well penned Lycia, brings birth and death together so well and makes one ponder on the moment of birth and death. Excellent indeed!
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Date: 1/13/2016 8:32:00 PM
this is WONDERFUL
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Date: 1/12/2016 3:30:00 PM
Top marks to you Lycia! I love this unique take of yours on this collaboration project..one of the very best that I have read so far. ~ Hope the start to the new year has been a positive one for you:) ~ Regards // paul
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Lycia Harding
Date: 1/12/2016 4:01:00 PM
Thank you so much Paul and the same to you, Dear Poe! xoxo
Date: 1/2/2016 8:34:00 PM
Lycia ; I like this write as the way it flows and the message it holds enclosed.
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Lycia Harding
Date: 1/3/2016 7:14:00 AM
Hahaha! EXCELLENT! Thank you, Donald. Funny man!
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Donald J Bennett
Date: 1/2/2016 10:58:00 PM
Yes Lycia is is attached and nice and clear. Appears to be a package nearly ready to be delivered. Nice.
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Lycia Harding
Date: 1/2/2016 8:47:00 PM
Thank you , Donald! But what I want to know is - can you see the picture I posted along with it?

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