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Sweet Breath

Lips dance, flirt together - romance. Sweet breath - language of love ‘til death. Hearts flared - poetic words declared! By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, 11/25/14, for Nette Onclaud's Whispers of a Muse - Poetry Contest

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Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/6/2014 11:33:00 PM

This is fantastic Rhonda and it directly goes to my fav, congrats on the win...huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2014 7:08:00 PM

Wonderfully romantic . Congrats, dearie.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/4/2014 4:19:00 AM

Congrats on ur winning wonderful write Rhonda!

Joseph May

Date: 12/3/2014 10:08:00 PM

Congrats on your win Rhonda

David Mohn

Date: 12/3/2014 7:43:00 PM

Just lovely Rhonda...congrats

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/3/2014 7:01:00 PM

WOW! Rhonda, I love this one. A Fav for me. Congratulations on your win!

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/3/2014 2:59:00 PM

Hi Rhonda, such a romantic verse of love! Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/3/2014 10:06:00 AM

ohh, if romance is like this, I want it, Rhonda.. so finely written.. thanks for being part of my contest with bright congrats!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/3/2014 9:29:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Rhonda:-) Hugs Jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/3/2014 9:11:00 AM

Beautifully romantic Rhonda. Congratulations on your win.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/27/2014 6:45:00 PM

truly beautifully painted rhonda golden pen dear friend

Paul Callus

Date: 11/27/2014 9:41:00 AM

Excellent, Rhonda! This Musette flows with passion and romance. I can already see it on the winners' list! #7 // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 12/3/2014 10:23:00 AM

This was a winner from the word go! Congratulations, Rhonda!! // paul

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/25/2014 7:01:00 PM

Happy Thanksgiving dear! Light & Love

Jack Horne

Date: 11/25/2014 3:04:00 PM

yes, I agree with Jan's comments - very beautiful indeed

Jan Allison

Date: 11/25/2014 12:08:00 PM

beautifully penned Rhonda - I love the challenge of this short form - so few words say so much:-) Hugs Janxx good luck!

Frederic Parker

Date: 11/25/2014 11:19:00 AM

Nicely done, good luck in the contest you have a strong entry

David Meade

Date: 11/25/2014 11:08:00 AM

Dancing, breathing, and passion . . . those are the ingredients of love and of an awesome poem . . . love the brevity of the impactful words.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/25/2014 8:49:00 AM

You whisper in beauteous tones.