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Bramazing Duke Part I

Be brave, said I, said I…Hey Duke, you are bramazing – brilliant and amazing combined…I hope you view this poem – I have a lot on my plate and I really like you…’l’ stands for ‘like’…’I’ stands for ‘ice cream’…K stands for ‘kake (cake)’…and ‘E’ is for ‘eggs’ – that, altogether – in sentence form, is “I have a lot on my plate and I really like you like ice cream, cake and eggs…that sounds childish and sounds wrong…sorry – I’ve tried to work my verse magicalness – that was also an acrostic in itself – it’s an acrostic within an acrostic – what a mind blowing reality of it all! Radiant sun shines on me when you comment on my writings And…I’d like to say ‘thank you’ for being a computer pal! Marvelous thoughts come to mind when I think of you and I’s relationship – yet, I don’t know you in person…however, that doesn’t really matter for the meantime A wisp of wistful breeze zips right through me…it’s as if the atmosphere is getting colder than cold itself…frozen in place forever…never floating in space…free me…set me free…free me…set me free…my mind repeats words…phrases…I’m part dyslexic and autistic as my mind tells me at this very moment as I’m writing this out without a slightest doubt…I pout…I doubt…I pout…I am a drought, thirsty for Him alone…He’s my backbone…I am on my own, but not alone…Duke, sorry – I get off topic sometimes, but you are absolutely nice and you’re personality is like sugar and spice with a touch of advice…does that sound abserk? I hope naught… I was hopeless – not! I used to hving a lying disorder when I was younger because I thot I could be sneeeeeky… I spell things wrong on purpose just in case any of you are grammar Nazis…I shouldn’t use that term, but oh well – who knows where the wind blows…I could write as long as I live with all of my perpetual might…God’s sight – a light at the end of the tunnel..what’s your Light, Duke? Zigzagging thoughts strike me…and I’m stuck – stuck – stuck in this pit for hours it seems…mend my broken, shattered dreams……………. Scattered reality of it all really pushed me out of shape and size…I make up sayings and quotes – I’m weird, aren’t I, Duke? Well – that’s the new me

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Date: 11/23/2014 8:50:00 AM
David I am completely flattered and amazed. I am in awe. May I apologize again for being late? IT is this crazy life of mine which has me so preoccupied at times. I will have more comments soon. Can't wait to order your books.
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