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The Hunt

Lethal alertness - Tigers, lions and leopards... The top-cats stalk their prey with shoulders hunched high up, belly low, grazing the grass Pure survival depends on deadly awareness - A stunning sight to behold A blinding speed rush A bite to the throat Yet I put them all to shame Just me, your housecat… Footnote: It is generally accepted that today’s ordinary housecats were first domesticated by the ancient Egyptians to control rats, mice and dangerous, venomous snakes in their grain houses, built with woven reed and easily gnawed through The housecat is by far the most efficient hunter in the cat family…Ever seen one scale a tree when they mean business? I once watched ours and the cat next door chasing each other up and down a tree. It was literally a matter of seconds each way…A squirrel wouldn't have stood a chance

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Date: 11/18/2016 9:42:00 AM
I have been "owned" by many cats throughout my life, and I agree... They put the rest of any other predators to shame. Just watching them plot, plunder, stalk and attack..... is a sight to behold. Then as they smugly stroll away to lick their paws like nothing of consequence has taken place........ I marvel at their cool matter=of-fact attitude !! Love your take on this one !!
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Date: 11/18/2016 4:12:00 AM
Congrats well-done x loved it x
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Date: 11/17/2016 11:41:00 PM
tim, this was keen and smart!... best congrats to you--wow!..huggs
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Date: 11/17/2016 4:52:00 PM
Very clever indeed, a great hunt story Tim
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Date: 1/28/2014 3:52:00 PM
Tim, CONGRATULATIONS, a very clever write, you did well in "Personifying Any Animal of Your Choosing" *enjoyed every poem.......... ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/11/2014 9:41:00 PM
NICE WRITE HERE AND THANK YOU FOR YOU ADDING ME TO YOUR FAVORITES LIST, ALSO I LOVE ALL CATS AND THE ABOVE FACTS ARE SPOT ON THE MARK. CHERI
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Date: 1/5/2014 3:10:00 AM
Nice presentation, Sir Tim! Congrats to you on your win in the contest and compliments of the seasons to you and yours.
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Date: 1/5/2014 1:02:00 AM
Enjoyed the personification and congrats on your win, Tim
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Date: 1/2/2014 10:57:00 PM
you did a unique and GREAT approach to this theme, my movie loving friend, and thanks for supporting my blog!!
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Date: 1/1/2014 5:55:00 PM
super interesting and enjoyable , tim... love the tempo of this piece; truly a "lethal awareness " made to surprise the reader..amazing, amazing!...huggs
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Date: 1/1/2014 7:30:00 AM
- Fantastic animals ..... yes, they are born to kill - a clever poem to the contest Tim - good luck! - I wish you a Happy New Year, all the best to you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/31/2013 11:29:00 AM
Was this written about my cat? If my cat had an online profile somewhere this poem would be the 'about me' section :p
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