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Blue Moon

She said blue moon is rising it understands what it is like to love to be human and alone uncertain imperfect. She knows the sun and the moon argues as to who will bring me to slumber I give into the night. I prefer to walk in light of day. I will slumber sleep under he the moon the orbiting albino with one thousand shafts of light as it casts cool upon the sea. Blue moon tonight a big crescent balloon shaving slivers from our soul over calm surface of the sea. Hold my hand and kiss me while the moon brings high tide to shore. It is a song of longing from blue moon of August full moon drum of the sea as the stars shine like small pearls. Minute moons in the sky dazzling images of light they wrap the blue seaweed sparkling, dancing and dizzy of tides. We embrace and kiss the sea horses neigh all the island mermaids come out to sing...

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Date: 10/19/2013 11:49:00 AM
What a most beautiful scene you have penned here. So many wonderful metaphor's within. As Always, Shar
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Ken Carroll
Date: 10/19/2013 11:52:00 AM
Thank you as you are most kind Sharon, Ken
Date: 9/4/2013 9:03:00 PM
How romantic! I love to go outside and just gaze at the moon whenever I can. Very beautiful poem, Ken! Loved it!...You might enjoy my poem, "Mystic Moon"...Thank you for commenting kindly on my poem, "Near". I really appreciate it!
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Ken Carroll
Date: 9/4/2013 9:09:00 PM
HI Kelly, Thank you for stopping by and leaving lovely feedback.. Ken
Date: 8/22/2013 9:33:00 AM
I too am fascinated by the blue moon! Thanks so much for stopping by and commenting on my verse. Light & Love
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Ken Carroll
Date: 8/22/2013 9:36:00 AM
Hi Debbie, Thank you for dropping by and leaving such nice commentary.. Much appreciated.. Ken..
Date: 8/21/2013 9:28:00 PM
Very beautiful poem kenneth! Thanks for your comment. (My dad was a california boy)he said he was waiting to be picked for the army, but ended up a marine-alls good!
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Ken Carroll
Date: 8/21/2013 9:36:00 PM
HI Karen, Thanks for visiting tonight and leaving such nice commentary..Good to read from you.. Ken..
Date: 8/21/2013 8:20:00 PM
Hello Kenneth, this reminds me of two hearts so so different and so so alike in every way. I like this a lot, it gave me an embracing feeling that love exist in every way possible. Sun & Moon. we are to one another. Masterful and marvelous and in some ways magical like a fantasy. I much enjoyed the imagery. Great write :-) your newest fan LINDA
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Ken Carroll
Date: 8/21/2013 8:30:00 PM
Hola mi Linda Paloma, Thank you for your beautiful comment...I'm delighted you liked it..The sun shines and the moon glistens.. Besos, Ken... :-)
Date: 8/21/2013 7:09:00 PM
Hi Skat, Thanks for dropping by and leaving a most lovely comment..I'm texting with your twin now...lol Regards, Ken..
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Date: 8/21/2013 6:40:00 PM
and from one side of the moon another ponders somebody elses thoughts with such beauty , such a lovely write, enjoyed, LUV S.K.A.T.
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