Blue

In the quiet night Blue melancholy color Softly wraps my world Hold fast to the blue mood song Its what the heart neads to hear

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2011 7:40:00 PM

Reminds me of moody blues from my high school day. Did you know that band? Love where you took this Barbara, It looks like Francine already warned you to just use Blue in your title. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/9/2011 4:10:00 PM

Brilliant use of the word blue with varied meanings, Good luck in the contest, Barbara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/9/2011 4:08:00 PM

Kinda sad..Good luck in the contest with this sure winner..Sara

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/9/2011 12:10:00 PM

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Kash Poet

Date: 2/9/2011 11:33:00 AM

Wonderful Tanka Barbara!Enjoyed--kashinath

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/9/2011 10:09:00 AM

This is very touching, dear LNC. The blueness can devour us. Wish there were something I could do to help dispel this feeling for you. Please let me know how the twins are doing when you have time. Love, Carolyn

Julie Heckman

Date: 2/9/2011 7:28:00 AM

your poem is exquisite, keep them coming. and thanks for you support with my Pantoum, it took about 4 hours to write... whew... Julie

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 2/9/2011 6:00:00 AM

Very blue,lovely post

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/9/2011 5:56:00 AM

And i'm sure your heart is ther too, Beautiful Barbara, A sheer delight to read. Good luck. Harry