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scattering ash clouds
i hum your favourite tune
rhapsody in blue
i look out at the calm sea
it seems to blend with the sky

For Andrea’s Tanka me a Colour contest, 12th May

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  1. Date: 7/5/2013 5:10:00 PM
    I picked this because blue is my color and you won with it ,,, good deal ;} thank you for reading my Salvation of Mel Gibson ;}

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 8:47:00 PM
    Jack, congratulations on having your poem Featured this past week. It was nice reading your poem tonight. Goodnight~ Linda

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 9:34:00 AM
    Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 6:39:00 AM
    most enjoyable well done on being featured

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 9:22:00 AM
    The sea and sky "blend" here as well, many congrats on your win Jack

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 9:19:00 AM
    Congratulation on your win Jack. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 1:16:00 AM
    Many congratulations on your win Jack, well done xx

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 12:56:00 AM
    aha, so this was YOURS, I had no idea who my winners were. So great to see them at the end of judging!! Congrats, my friend.

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 9:03:00 PM
    this is an awesome , JACK,,, GOOD JOB IN Andrea... Tanka me a color CONTEST. CONGRATULATIONS.... XOX~ Linda

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 8:11:00 PM
    Jack, I love reading your poems. this one is lovely. congrats. BG

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 5:12:00 PM
    A beautiful tanka and blue is my favorite color. nicely done. love phyl

  1. Date: 5/16/2013 4:22:00 PM
    You've got a definite winner here, Jack! Beautiful imagery of sea and sky and the color blue. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 5/15/2013 12:25:00 PM
    Rhapsody in Blue and scattered clouds. I like the picture. Love, daver

  1. Date: 5/13/2013 4:42:00 PM
    Jack, this is a beautiful tanka, a winner in the contest for sure, I just love it and thanks for visiting my poems, constance (ps, you got it right)

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 6:44:00 PM
    A brilliant Tanka Jack. You made it seem and easy task, but I know a Tanka can be tricky if not thought out carefully. It should place high in this contest. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 5:50:00 PM
    This is quite the brilliant and wondrous write my friend! You have written such a glorious poem Jack! What a tremendous piece, really an awesome poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 5:03:00 PM
    Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this one today..Very unique and creative ...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 11:20:00 AM
    feeling so high with your calm rendition of the theme, jack.. a pleasure to read yo again after my long leave... simply exquisite..:) huggs

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 10:27:00 AM
    Very beautiful images captured in the elegant verse. Very serene.