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Bloody Tea!!!

I was startled one day by a flea. Who laughed with a right fine tee- he- hee. He bit my thigh for a snack. Then he jumped onto my back, and called all his fine friends to have tea! Line 1, 9 syllables Line 2, 9 syllables Line 3, 7 syllables Line 4, 7 syllables Line 5, 9 syllables

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/8/2010 9:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, this is so cute, I loved it~~
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Date: 8/7/2010 6:33:00 PM
Congrats Teach on your winning poem in the Limerick contest with this really good one.. enjoy another sweet victory ....with luv.. miss your blogging.. pupil..luv..
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Date: 8/7/2010 4:01:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Deborah
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Date: 8/6/2010 10:58:00 AM
Cute poem Debbie, congratulations on your success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/6/2010 10:42:00 AM
Awesome chuckle out of this one Deborah. Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn & John's fine contest with this Limerick gem >> James
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Date: 8/6/2010 8:48:00 AM
Cute poem, Deborah! Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/6/2010 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations Deb on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's / John Freeman's contest "Are You Bugged". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/5/2010 5:04:00 PM
Well TEACH bugs are NOT my thing so I passed on this contest .. good luck to u.. a really funny read.. and luv your explanation for the syllable count.. awesome... pupil..luvs...
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Date: 8/5/2010 10:22:00 AM
Good luck in the contest with this worthy write..Sara
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Date: 8/5/2010 4:09:00 AM
I see you got the syllable count down perfectly! SMILES. Now that is a winner in my book! Excellent form and funny! SMILES.
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Date: 8/4/2010 7:39:00 PM
Soupmail in a minute!!!
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Date: 8/4/2010 7:18:00 PM
Thanks for the H.M. in your contest I'm glad you enjoyed.Thank you~I'm Honored~~~This limerick is great, If there's one flea there'll be another.God bless you Guzzi
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Date: 8/4/2010 6:37:00 PM
Soup mail
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Date: 8/4/2010 5:45:00 PM
This one is really good, Deb, but I think you should put it all in the past like the other verbs and say laughed and bit. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/4/2010 4:15:00 PM
I didn't realize how literal the title was until I read the limerick, a perfect fit! Blessings Chris
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Date: 8/4/2010 3:51:00 PM
Real cute! see Soupmail
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Date: 8/4/2010 3:46:00 PM
Very enjoyed... love your writes... Michael
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Date: 8/4/2010 2:47:00 PM
love that second line lol,, tea time huh?,, he he cool write..P.D.
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