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Senryu 4 - Canvas

a new year is born the old is gone forever-- blank canvas awaits 1/12/12 entered in Brian Strand's "One from your last fifty posted on PS" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/11/2012 9:45:00 PM
Great haiku, Kim! :) I love to write haiku as well. Looking forward to reading more.
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Date: 1/10/2012 11:30:00 AM
So very true Kim.Very nice Senryu by you.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 1/8/2012 9:12:00 PM
cast your spell upon the canvas, and life begins anew, the lines do lose their blandness, and life comes into view...
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Date: 1/8/2012 9:00:00 PM
Black canvas....An interesting perspective to the year that awaits us. Nicely written!...Milt
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Date: 1/6/2012 8:46:00 AM
Enjoyed Kim thank you . Declan xx
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Date: 1/3/2012 10:53:00 AM
A chance to make chages and do things a little better. Good stuff. God Bless and Happy New Year, JB
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Date: 1/3/2012 10:28:00 AM
Good Haiku.
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Date: 1/2/2012 8:46:00 PM
Nicely done, Kim. Yes, it IS a blank canvas for now!
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Date: 1/2/2012 6:33:00 PM
yes- what will we paint- thank you for sharing, and thank you for your visit and New Year blessings, likewise, Brenda
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Date: 1/2/2012 2:12:00 PM
YES----------------------------------- YES----------------------------------- YES----------------------------------- oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/2/2012 12:20:00 AM
And now we all startt painting... enjoyed your poem, Happy New Year, Greg
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Date: 1/1/2012 8:20:00 PM
Happy New Year Kim! I really like this-it is very inspirational to get us on track for the new year :)
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Date: 1/1/2012 8:10:00 PM
KIM,,, A VERY GREAT START FOR ME... THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS VERSE..... best wishes to you this year. always,..p.d.
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Date: 1/1/2012 7:51:00 PM
nicely put and so true!
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Date: 1/1/2012 7:39:00 PM
The new year begins...what-ever will we paint our canvas with..beautiful words?? Love this !!
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