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Blame It On the Moon

Silhouettes of the far off skies laced through the edge of madness bring a certain dance to your feet and some mysterious sadness. Into the depths of black and beyond temptation knows no bounds. Moonlight breathes upon the earth while passion's song resounds. Under the lunar tapestry love outlives it's hunger. Thirst and greed shall disappear while all the world grows younger. Blame it on the stars above; those crescent pieces of sky. Blame it on the moon's pale glow and never question why. written 10/28/2013 for contest"Blame It On The Moon"

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Date: 11/7/2013 8:57:00 AM
Good luck in the contest. Thanks for hosting a good contest, I enjoyed reading all the entries. Thanks for the honorable mention.
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Date: 11/6/2013 9:04:00 PM
Deb, this is a pretty deep Blame It On The Moon poem.... congrats... LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/4/2013 8:58:00 AM
stellar write so rich in its exression, deb... sweet cograts on your win!..:) hugggs
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Date: 11/4/2013 8:59:00 AM
" congrats"
Date: 11/3/2013 12:10:00 AM
Wonderful poem, enjoyed very much!
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Date: 11/3/2013 12:08:00 AM
I love this excellent poem of yours my dear friend Deb! You didi it very well. Faving it. Thanks a lot! I see congratulatory remarks below, so I'm extending my biggest hearty congratulations at once! Cheers and biggest hugs! By the way, thanks to you also for enjoying one of my latest poems. So glad to hear again from you and read one of your precious gems! Have a great day my dear friend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 11/2/2013 6:24:00 PM
I really like this one, Deb. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/2/2013 12:09:00 PM
Lovely! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/1/2013 6:28:00 PM
There really is something about the full moon, that changes the mood of some people........I try not to ask why.....but it would be interesting to know what it is all about....lol !! Wonderful poem, Deb!!
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Date: 11/1/2013 6:08:00 PM
Congrats on your great winning work..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 11/1/2013 5:48:00 PM
I must agree with Christopher, this is so far my favorite of the poems I have read...it flows with grace and the images are lovely....gorgeous poem you have penned here :)
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Date: 11/1/2013 7:59:00 AM
Deb, This is, by far, my favorite of the entries. You are a clever wordsmith that does not sacrifice art in the process of creating wordplay. I love this stanza: "Under the lunar tapestry love outlives it's hunger. Thirst and greed shall disappear while all the world grows younger" At some point, the strength of passion in love evolves into strength of resolve, where love is no longer fed by feeling, but by choice...as we age. I love it. Grats on your win!!! CTB
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Date: 11/1/2013 7:26:00 AM
Well done Deb love it xx
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Date: 10/28/2013 3:57:00 PM
Hello Deb, This touches me so. Love the feel and flow of it. Beautiful dear poet Lov, Shar
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Date: 10/28/2013 1:39:00 PM
Truly awesome piece you've penned. I think this is a strong contender for the contest and I wish you luck to win. You really impressed me with this piece; great job and kudos! :)
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Date: 10/28/2013 9:25:00 AM
A nice take on the theme of the contest, deb
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Date: 10/28/2013 6:42:00 AM
This is awesome Deb! I truly loved reading this delightful poem of the moon's eternal glow and its forces on us! What a masterful piece you have written, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/28/2013 3:59:00 AM
- Deb, yes it is mysterious sadness .... well written! - Good luck in the contest. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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