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Below is the poem entitled BIRTH of ECLIPSE which was written by poet Ismael Nieves. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The brilliant hot Sun
joins with the glowing cold Moon:
Red Eclipse is born.

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  1. Date: 9/10/2009 1:26:00 PM
    Nice use of imagery and personification for an interesting view. Much said in just three lines. I see you recently joined Poetry Soup. Welcome! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Blessings to you. Karen

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 9:33:00 AM
    Oh my I can see it. Outstanding Kaiku Ismael. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/9/2009 10:10:00 PM
    Powerful imagery, nice work...Raul