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Birth Ii

Sultry San Francisco September enveloped hours of labor. Hot, searing waves of pain moved around and down My mound of naked flesh pushing as a tide with no ebb. Into the dank, dark North Beach hotel room came two men dressed in white, Blurred in their motions of haste by my sweat-filled eyes. My nakedness was covered by a cool white sheet floating down with a caress. Three flights of stairs met us as they carried the stretcher down Out into the concrete furnace of Indian summer. Tourists standing staring watched My mouth open in a triumphant scream: "The Baby ... the baby is coming!" Moments later, siren sounds filled my mind as his body brought the crowning.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 10/31/2008 3:21:00 PM
Vivid imagery conveys your story in a powerful way in this poem. Congratulations on having it selected as one of the winners in Kristin's Narrative contest. I wish you continued sucess in your writing. Karen
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Date: 10/30/2008 1:36:00 PM
Congratulations Sue, on your win in Kristin's contest. Well deserved!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/29/2008 6:24:00 PM
Excellent my lolli-pop girl! I loved everything about this tiring, painful and pure poem. I have done this 5 times, and these is absolutly nothing on earth MORE than giving birth - you captured it well - congrats my friend. Love Kristin
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Date: 10/29/2008 3:00:00 PM
Yippeee! Yahooo! Congrats Sue on your win in Kristin's contest! Wait a minute - how did I miss this??? Maybe it brought back bad memories. Mine wasn't so fun. : ) Excellent write! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/29/2008 8:19:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Kristin's contest Sue.rgds Brian
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